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in the fight of his life

friends, friends
in a fight
by this streetlight
drenched in light
i should have known
that you were right
before i started up this fight
now i am sorry




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sasssgirrrl22 said...
May 3, 2010 at 9:27 pm:
ooo i realy like thisss. it kinda feelz like itz got anothr meaning, also. gr8 jobb, plz keep writingg.  this is really kewwl xD
 
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Lonleydandy said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 5:18 pm:
You weren't bored when you wrote this one, eh? Hahaha, I notice you get bored a lot. Anyway, I think some of your work is pretty good :D
 
Andrew:)139864133432 replied...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 8:11 am :
thanks for your opinions. i think though that my work is in need of some grammer checks and intresting stuff. :p
 
Andrew:)139864133432 replied...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 8:12 am :
i was bored i guess. :v) ??
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 5:07 pm :
Haha, yes, I suppose so.hahahahha
 
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