Crush

December 17, 2009
By contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
to love and to be loved is lifes greatest joy


ive never felt this way before
it's all brand new to me
my head is spinning i cant breathe
your all i see
i long for you to notice me
i wish you'd ask me out
so this is what first love is like,
and what a crush is all about!


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on Apr. 6 2010 at 10:01 pm
contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
to love and to be loved is lifes greatest joy

lol its okay!!!!!!!!! thank you!

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on Apr. 6 2010 at 8:45 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

THIS IS REALLY CUTE!!!! SORRY ITSIT'S IN ALL CAPS LOCK, MY KEYBOARD IS A LITTLE MESSED UPRIGHT NOW.... :)

on Mar. 4 2010 at 7:54 pm
contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
to love and to be loved is lifes greatest joy

thank you and i will keep on writing

on Mar. 1 2010 at 4:25 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This is amazing!!! I still say KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, NEVER QUIT WRITING PLEASE!!! =)

on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:24 am
contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
4 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
to love and to be loved is lifes greatest joy

thank you guys for commenting on this im sorta in the same situation thats y i actually wrote it

on Feb. 13 2010 at 1:25 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

i'm in this situation right now actually with a guy at school. i love how much this poem can connect to pretty much anyone because i think everybody goes through this at least once in their life. great job, i loved it! :)

on Jan. 27 2010 at 6:22 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

I CAN COMPLETELY CONNECT TO THIS!!!!

AWESOME JOB, KEEP ON WRITING!!! :)

on Jan. 23 2010 at 1:28 pm
contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
4 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
to love and to be loved is lifes greatest joy

thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!! i know this goes thorough my mind when i think of my crush!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 5:54 am
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.
-the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...
-good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

This is beautiful. It's what goes through everyone's head at some point..so real


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