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ive never felt this way before
it's all brand new to me
my head is spinning i cant breathe
your all i see
i long for you to notice me
i wish you'd ask me out
so this is what first love is like,
and what a crush is all about!





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justbe-3 said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 8:45 pm
THIS IS REALLY CUTE!!!! SORRY ITSIT'S IN ALL CAPS LOCK, MY KEYBOARD IS A LITTLE MESSED UPRIGHT NOW.... :)
 
contrygurl replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 10:01 pm
lol its okay!!!!!!!!! thank you!
 
contrygurl said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 12:24 am
thank you guys for commenting on this im sorta in the same situation thats y i actually wrote it
 
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 4:25 pm
This is amazing!!! I still say KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, NEVER QUIT WRITING PLEASE!!! =)
 
contrygurl replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 7:54 pm
thank you and i will keep on writing
 
TeamJacobArchuleta said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 1:25 pm
i'm in this situation right now actually with a guy at school. i love how much this poem can connect to pretty much anyone because i think everybody goes through this at least once in their life. great job, i loved it! :)
 
EmmaXoxo<3 said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 6:22 pm
I CAN COMPLETELY CONNECT TO THIS!!!!
AWESOME JOB, KEEP ON WRITING!!! :)
 
Rosalie said...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 5:54 am
This is beautiful. It's what goes through everyone's head at some point..so real
 
contrygurl replied...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 1:28 pm
thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!! i know this goes thorough my mind when i think of my crush!
 
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