Best Friends Forever MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   



We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!





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MRose911 GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2011 at 2:23 am
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

I love this! :) Great work!

on Dec. 11 2010 at 8:38 pm
Lost.In.Life BRONZE, Port Angeles, Washington
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Agrred, to me it almost seemed as if you were afraid to give it your own voice. Almost as if it were a chore :P

Dont be afraid to loosen up ! :)


on Dec. 11 2010 at 8:30 am
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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Great Poem! Friendship is so important! Love it!

AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 6:06 pm
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!! Just change 'know' to 'knew'. :)

AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 6:06 pm
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

Ummm, Pat, maybe not a brilliant idea to give out all your info over the internet. Just be careful! :)

Vanne SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 4:33 pm
Vanne SILVER, Hawthorne, California
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Favorite Quote:
I hope one day you'll find all my quotes, all my words and read them all. I hope you'll know my message.

You know i actually use to think just like this....i believed best friends were real and were true, that they could help and not be judgemental....but i was wrong.....and even thou i dnt believe in best friends anymore, i enjoyed ur poem :)

CassieOs said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 2:21 pm
CassieOs, Northfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"What an irony that a society confronted with plastic bags filled with the remains of aborted babies should be more concerned about the problem of recycling the plastic"... - Winifred Egan

"I've never met anyone like you. You're amazing and annoying at the same time... but it just makes me love you that much more. For every slap I want to give you, there's a million kisses. CLARISSA JANE you make me crazy and I love it"

Amen to that sister!

on Nov. 19 2010 at 9:19 am
That is a marvalous poem! I wish my best friend could relize thats how shes suppose to act!

soccerswim25 said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 9:18 am
i thought the poem was really good and its soundslike your very talented! ilove it because i can connect with it and hope you post more!:)

on Oct. 28 2010 at 4:27 pm
Bookworm_Belle GOLD, Litchfield Park, Arizona
19 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will never know whats on the next lily pad unless you leap

I love this poem. It reminds me of me and my best friend, as well al me amd my boyfriend

AndrewC BRONZE said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 8:42 am
AndrewC BRONZE, Madison, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I like people who shake other people up and make them feel uncomfortable."
-Jim Morrison

You used the typical kindergarten rhyme, and I really didn't feel it.  Its like you just wrote down words without feeling them.  You tried to be to "perfect".  Open up a bit and write.

on Oct. 28 2010 at 1:50 am
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
'you touched my heart, through it's shell'

Really cute...

My only critique would be to not always go for the obvious rhyme.


iheartmaria said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 8:00 pm
iheartmaria, Hialeah, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even if you dont achieve your goal but tried your hardest you ahieved half of it.

Yea same here i love my sister she is like a best friend and we havent seen each other in 2 years

on Oct. 6 2010 at 12:32 pm
I was the same way with my bff Samantha! But then she was killed in a crash pn highway 65... :(

on Oct. 6 2010 at 9:35 am
DarknessForever13 SILVER, Gainesville, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoth the Raven: "Nevermore!"
"What's right isn't always popular, but what's popular isn't always right." - Unknown

This poem reminds me of my friend, sister, actually, for that is what we call eachother. We will be friends for 11 years next year. Even when she was at Saint Mary's school for 3 years, we stayed coneccted. Then she came back to Callisburg, and we have never been closer, I am glad others are fortunate to have a friend like that as well.  

on Oct. 6 2010 at 8:56 am
WriterFighter PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Other
32 articles 3 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
*Women and men are very different, but not when it comes down to their heart

Its sort of a simple but sweet dedication to a friend. I would of like something a little more aloborate, ex: more rimes.

I know we arent all perfect when it comes to writting and I know this as well, my poetry isnt perfect either.


AlyssaNeal said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:55 am
AlyssaNeal, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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This poem is so sweet, im sure your best friend loved it. I love it when you find friends like that, when you know, that they are their to stay. It really means alot. Beautifully written!

on Sep. 2 2010 at 11:34 pm

aww! how sweet(:

i love it(:


Lucy(: GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 12:27 am
Lucy(: GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
18 articles 0 photos 31 comments

totally agree.

its very simple, maybe could use some extra "beef" (=


on Aug. 1 2010 at 11:35 am
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

♥♥♥♥♥♥ i am speech less this is amazing


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