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We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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coly33 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 7:17 pm:

awww i love it, it reminded me of my memors with my freinds and the ideas of our future memories

great poem

:)

 
coly33 replied...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 7:18 pm :
opps i mean memories
 
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baby_girlaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:48 am:
this is a real great piece and that is the truth. you can stay friends with one for a long time and still remember the glory days. is it all right if I use this for my graduation in 2012?
 
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SKN17 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 6:31 am:

Good one; very simply written yet conveys a poignant truth so close to home!

I love it :)

 
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Nanner said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 1:43 pm:
So very easy to relate to. I enjoyed reading it. :)
 
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LA CHIKKAH LOCA said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 8:15 pm:
DiS SOUNdS AL0t lykkk My H0MiTA Ndd ME :)
 
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demetria said...
May 27, 2010 at 4:59 pm:

beef it up!!!

try using more advanced vocabulary. give the reader a image of what kind of friend she he/she is and why she is your friend. you can say she is a good friend but.....the reader doesn't want to just take your word for it..they want to feel it..absorb it.. and believe it. so just add a little more..umph!

 
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GracieLynn said...
May 27, 2010 at 1:51 pm:
I really liked this. My best friend's graduating this year and it's really hard on me. This poem is exactly how our friendship is:)
 
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luv2swim said...
May 27, 2010 at 10:04 am:
Hey this was great!! You did a really good job! Do you think you could read some of my work? Thanks!!
 
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Cuore said...
May 5, 2010 at 9:16 pm:
nice although I would change know to knew
 
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EleanorRigby This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2010 at 4:45 pm:
this is like a poem you'd see in a greeting card
 
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HissecretloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 5, 2010 at 9:32 am:
oh my gosh i loved it
 
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rose96 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 4:59 pm:
I love that sooo much! It is a really amazing poem!
 
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Patience97 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 12:02 pm:
I think it is really sweet, and it is a way that I could describe my friends, as well as a way they could describe me. It's lovely :)
 
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anjelica said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 10:35 am:
this poem really expresses the way friends should be, i thinks its great.
 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 9:44 am:
wow, i'm surprised i thought this was going to be a bittter poem about a friend who betrayed you or something but instead it was really nice, good job!
 
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awwwwwwwww said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 9:34 pm:
i like your poem because its about friends, i love my friends so in my mind have many memories whith my friends i love this poem
 
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caylaishappy said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 4:36 pm:

I love this poem because it reminds me of me and my best friend.

When I am sad she understands. when i laugh she does too. it just reminds me that she'll be there for me too like i am with her

 
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$hamnii said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 7:06 am:
aww me and best friend forever and also were not bff again =[ how sad
 
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xBaByGiRrL22xThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 7:54 pm:
aww this is so cuute.
it not very long, but very meaningful.
awesome job i luv it
 
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Liquid_Sky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 5:13 pm:
Not very good, but it was cute...
 
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