Best Friends Forever MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   



We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!





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elizamc83 GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 7:04 pm
elizamc83 GOLD, Concord, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"From now on, I don't care if my tea leaves spell 'Die, Ron, die,' I'm chucking them in the bin where they belong." -Ron Weasley

i totally agree :)

on Apr. 30 2012 at 5:23 pm
Perfect-Darkness GOLD, Kennebunk, Maine
19 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
One of the hardest things you'll ever have to do is to stop loving someone because they've stopped loving you.

I think it was amazing, even with the simple words, to me it seems pretty powerful :P I loved it, it made me think of my best friend...now I miss her

 


on Apr. 30 2012 at 4:18 pm
Maryberry28mt BRONZE, Moreland Hills, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give me time. I'll give you a revolution." -Alexander McQueen

It was okay. Little too simple for my taste. Needs more descriptive words. 

Ivyalyn said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 1:50 pm
I really liked how you used Rhythm in your poem. It really added to the effect. I also liked how you made kind of like a limerick with your rhythming patterns. Great job(:

sydzue said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 8:06 am
Your poem was good; it had a rhythm that flowed very smoothly, and was easy to read. Your figuritive language expressed your thoughts really nicely and it was very good.

Lauren T. said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 8:01 am
I thought this piece of poetry was deep gave a little but of a heart warming feeling to me. In your poetry I found scansion, and found a rhythm to your poem. On the ending words of a verse, I also found assonance with long sounds that were the same.

on Apr. 30 2012 at 7:54 am
decievinghimesama SILVER, Cebu, Other
9 articles 2 photos 20 comments
like it ♥ now I miss my best friend all the more

on Apr. 8 2012 at 10:57 pm
Jennalynn SILVER, Montville, New Jersey
9 articles 4 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where there is love, there is life."

I think this was a pretty decent poem, yes, it wasn't deep and powerful, but poetry is whatever the author wishes it to be. It was simple, not spectacular, but still had some good ideas. I think with more editing and focus it could be even better. Keep writing :)

Moee1 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 1:26 pm
Moee1 BRONZE, Bowie, Maryland
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Hope is a necessity, evaluating the morals of our determination. Love is an opportunity, displaying the occurrence of whom is accepted within you. Intelligence is a desire, it urges ones motives to incline.”-Mohamed Roberts

This is soo beautiful :)

on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:49 am
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

I liked this especialy because the way I thought it was leading to one thing, and ended up somewhere else! Cograts on the publication! Nice Work!

on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:49 am
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

I liked this especialy because the way I thought it was leading to one thing, and ended up somewhere else! Cograts on the publication! Nice Work!

rock ganxta said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 2:56 am

i  lyk tha page

 


on Feb. 24 2012 at 8:54 pm
lovemenot PLATINUM, Port Angeles, Washington
29 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My names Red and Im an alcoholic."~Red, Shark Night 3D

Why does everyone need to be so negative? Shouldnt we be supportive of those who get published?

Your poem was great, keep writing!


on Feb. 24 2012 at 2:56 pm
MarleyRainbow PLATINUM, Valles MInes, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
one good thing about music is, when it hits you, you feel no pain.

it was okay i guess not that bad but keep writting

 


on Feb. 8 2012 at 8:30 pm
garthgirl8888 BRONZE, Long Beach, California
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments
good, but nothing spectacular...

kelly said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 8:12 pm
this poem made me think that my friendship would last from the start and i would love my best friend WealthyLoving.COMit's a right place for you. Online dating in the developed countries for the millionaire singles and admirers.

JuneTaz said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 4:16 pm
^^What she said

dya.o PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 8:39 am
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
43 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If consensus is overrated, I think balance is, too.
I have no interest in living a balanced life.
I want a life of adventure.” | Chris Guillebeau

I honestly don't see how this was voted top piece of the day it just seems bland and without that much emotion. Still your good, keep writing:D

Zayyy BRONZE said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 9:21 pm
Zayyy BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
2 articles 1 photo 15 comments
love it it was amazing

Nick-M SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 7:54 pm
Nick-M SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
-FLTDO-

Really nice! I know this feeling... My poem 'I am the Garden' is a new type of poem I don't usually write-- because I'm in love! Feedback would be... spectacular!


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