Old Blue Jeans

September 25, 2009
I am as soft
and smooth as bricks
and as torn as
my old blue jeans,

and just like them
I am noble
enough to know
just what it means

to be in need
of a little
care, compassion,
and love once in

a while. I need
those three, and to
be forgiven
for all my sin.

I sit on the
brick stoop, with my
old blue jeans and
brand new hope

to someday smooth
the edges, fix these
tears and maybe
just learn to cope.

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SlamminMan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 10:31 am
i didn't read this one last time but i realy lik the way u wrote it and how it doesn't ryme (if thats how you spell it) but it is put together near perfect and it sounds beautiful
aub13zzz replied...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 10:57 am
thanks!!! :D
josiebelle said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 12:34 pm

i liked the methaphor of the jeans it was really well done!!


could you check out some of mine??

aub13zzz replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 11:03 am
thanks! and sure :)
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