life peom

June 22, 2009
By , fremont, CA

life is like a fire

but it is still being admired

why does the life exists

life cant be dismissed

why do we exists

“life?” noting you can make out of this

is everyone crazy?

or are they just super lazy?

why am I asking this?

I feel like throwing a fiss

Am I just super mad

why am I so sad

do I even care?

I think that the life is not fair!

I am the only one who thinks that way

just say what u have got to say

there is a freedom of speech

we are here to learn and teach

But that’s not my whole point

I am sad and disappoint

I must smile now

but I don’t know how

am I just talking

actually I feel like walking

I should be going now

by chance if you would allow

I am gonna count to three

and I must be just me

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wsultan1 said...
Jun. 30, 2009 at 8:27 pm

This is really good! Good Work and Keep it up :D
Mona S. said...
Jun. 30, 2009 at 7:27 pm
I love it and thanks:)
bella said...
Jun. 30, 2009 at 7:25 pm
i love this poem!!!!!
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