Moving Shape

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The fire burns the bridge I walk,
The water drowns the ground I seek,
The wind torments
the trees that stand.
And I sit on a moving shape.
Taking in all.
Some leaves join me
but fly away.
Some are cemented down.
You're one of those leaves
That I want so bad to stay.
But I can feel you
slowly drifting away.
Please don't leave me...
I want you with me.
Never blow away.





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amyxu said...
Jun. 12, 2009 at 7:15 pm
Very interesting. I like the last few lines, it's such a beautiful thought. I don't really understand what the "moving shape" is, though. Maybe it's a car or a bike or time? Anyway, good job. :)
 
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 3:08 pm
ThankYou : )  An when I originally wrote this {Has been a wile}  ..I believe the moving shape, was time
 
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