The Life

April 30, 2009
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The life is soon approaching
You never know if life is over
The life is far too gone
When will the moment pass
Life is done
Life is too soon





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kiwi12 said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 8:55 pm
Eh. I think it needs more pretty words, it's not very descriptive at all. I want to see what you are trying to portray, even if it is just "the life"
 
NightMareB4Christina said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 12:39 pm
i like this and it's terribly true.
i like the parrelism between lines!
it makes it more fun to read.
 
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