The eyes of Kiru

October 19, 2011
By Imperfectlife SILVER, Rochester, New York
Imperfectlife SILVER, Rochester, New York
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Summary:

In this story, A college-level girl genius, Kiru, who lives in a normal everyday life like most teens except she hides the secret that she's a genius. She struggles to keep her secret hidden from anyone but her family, she has succeeded until to the climax of her friend's kidnapping.


Yolie S.

The eyes of Kiru


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on Apr. 11 2014 at 1:35 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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It's really great! But maybe there's too much info that you don't need? It's still quite good tho. 

on Nov. 8 2013 at 4:12 pm
Barnowl14 BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
3 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only time to eat diet food is while waiting for the steak to cook"- Julia Child

I like it, but I'm finding it's a little bit hard to read because of the huge paragraphs. Other then tat, it's good!

on Oct. 24 2011 at 5:16 pm
Imperfectlife SILVER, Rochester, New York
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments
Thank you so much for reading my story!

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on Oct. 22 2011 at 10:22 pm
Amieblossom, Garden Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If I had to chase your soul to the ends of eternity, I won't stop until I find you, I promise."-Ash, from The Iron Knight

Haha. I love it. Her sarcasm and thought make me laugh. I love the originality of her name also. Keep going, you're doing great.

on Oct. 22 2011 at 11:23 am
Imperfectlife SILVER, Rochester, New York
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments
you can give critques, I need them to make my story better.

on Oct. 22 2011 at 10:36 am
Imperfectlife SILVER, Rochester, New York
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments
Hi! I'm the writer here, Yolie S. and I hope you like this story here. Do please read it and ask me if you want more updates for this story.


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