Burned

October 11, 2011
By 1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
5 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Summary:

I wake up, suddenly wondering when I went to sleep, where I went to sleep. Then I take in my surroundings, my slightly burnt, thin and leathery suit with deep red sneakers my long braided black and red hair and my ridged and scratched painted red nails, and I realize I am not in London anymore. Yet still I am surrounded by a breathtaking view. There are beautiful flowers, snowdrop, primrose, daffodils, daisies, hawthorn, roses, larkspur, poppies, aster, calendula, chrysanthemum, narcissus and a flower


Photo credit: Amanda S., Glenmont, NY

Author's comments about this article:
If you read this please comment, because I am making a long story. I hope all you talented writers will give me some advice! I have other parts to add, please tell me if I should post some. My Idol is Suzanne Collins HUNGER GAMES FOREVER!!! I cannot place. I feel a sudden tingling sensation in my entire body, and then the most frightening thing that I could think of happens to me, I forget everything except that I am Kayla...


Alexandra N.

Burned


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on Jan. 16 2012 at 12:18 pm
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
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I know I just loved the plot about that story. I'm sorry I took so long to respond, with a new quarter of school comes more issues socially and educationally. But anyways thanks for commenting! :)

on Oct. 20 2011 at 4:12 pm
ValWiggin SILVER, Grayslake, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"I am always doing that which I cannot do, in order to learn how to do it." ~ Pablo Picasso

really good, but so much like the hunger games




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