CIA: CHILD INSANE ASYLUME

September 30, 2014
By Tinakoo_Tinoco, Chicago, Illinois
Tinakoo_Tinoco, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Its better off to get up and move on, than to sit there and watch your misery go by"


Summary:

George is a security guard that works that the local asylum, simply known as the child insane asylum. One day, he is offered the job as a night shift guard for some overtime. But little did he realize the truth that lies within the walls of this asylum


Christopher T.

CIA: CHILD INSANE ASYLUME


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KjStormy said...
on Oct. 5 2014 at 12:00 pm
KjStormy, Melbourne, Other
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I'm gunna give you a little bit of constructive criticism, but rememer that this is my personal opinion and doesn't mean that there is anything wrong with your story, this is simply my advice on what I enjoy in a book. I think maybe your moving a little too fast and you could maybe use some more description in some areas. Other than that I think the plot sounds awesome and that this has great potential. It's definitely a book I would buy an read :)




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