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Blunt's Solitude

Will H.
Blunt's Solitude
Summary: When Mot O'Brien, a lowly farmer, receives a letter telling him that his father has died, he goes on a quest to reach and sell the haunted property that his father had not bequeathed to anyone. Mot struggles against ghosts of his past, and ghosts he has not known, he has to make a decision that will change his future forever. . .for better or worse.





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jelly bean said...
May 6 at 3:48 pm
what happened next?
 
PatrickEDC said...
Apr. 26 at 2:26 am
I hope you don't mind criticism. I've found that's how I improve most in my writing. First off, one of the main things is that you always refer to Mot as either "Mot" or "He." This gets a bit redundant. Try interspersing those with descriptive phrases or adjectives such as "The boy" or "The young man." Also, I find it hard to picture Mot. You need to describe him, paint a picture of him in your reader's mind. At the least give us his age, or an approximation of it. Secondly, this is more... (more »)
 
Coolio said...
Jun. 3, 2013 at 8:08 pm
I want to know what happens! Write more about this story!
 
Gran said...
Jun. 2, 2013 at 4:31 pm
Very creative. I enjoyed it and look forward to reading your next story.
 
hodges.wt said...
Jun. 2, 2013 at 1:30 pm
This is my first teenink story!
 

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