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The Protector

Amanda H.
The Protector
Summary: Riley finds out that she is adopted and the daughter of the greek Goddess Artimis. If her day could get any worse she finds out that she needs to stop the evil God Loki from destroying the world.

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S.E.Beiler said...
Sept. 19, 2017 at 8:03 pm
This was a good story, I really thought the plot was a good idea. But I do have some suggestions: The relationship between Jace and Riley is super rushed. I get it, this is a short story, but at least have some time elapse, it just seemed so quick. You mention a snake that kept following her, later we find out that it is likely this is Loki in a shape shifting form, but so what? Nothing comes out of it and it just was a little confusing. Introducing Artemis was really quick and we didn't get to ... (more »)
BekahBekah said...
May 24, 2012 at 5:04 am
Mmm.. I liked the main idea, though, how Riley was actually Artemis's daughter and stuff.. I think you should edit and lengthen it and actually make it into an actual story or a book, even. :) 

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