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Summary: All Elyon has ever known is the life of a slave, working on the plantations, and taking care of Matte, his brother. But now, the stargazers on Mount Pyle have recruited him to be one of them. How is he supposed to learn about stargazing when all he knows is how to farm?

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imagonner said...
May 19, 2016 at 11:15 am
this is very well written! if you would like some advice id say, that you shouldn't rush things so much. an average novel is 64,000 words long. around 2000 words for the average chapter in a novel. unless, this is a novella than it is great.
guesswho said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 3:15 pm
Great story again!!! Wonderful ending...
DreamingOurWorld replied...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 8:45 pm
Mom...please change your name...

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