Desvania

May 1, 2014
By dabanis15, Sellersville, Pennsylvania
dabanis15, Sellersville, Pennsylvania
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Desvania


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on May. 8 2014 at 8:30 am
CNBono17 SILVER, Rural, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Lego ergo sum (Latin—I read, therefore, I am)
The pen is mightier than the sword—unknown
Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for believers in speech, in conduct, in love, in faith, and in purity—1 Timothy 4:12

Wow. Dramatic. Could have used a little more background, and you could've introduced the main character a little earlier. (Until you said his name was John, I couldn't tell it it was a boy or a girl). But the premise is good, and the story itself isn't bad:)




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