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Desvania

dabanis15
Desvania
Summary: It is good





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CNBono17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 8, 2014 at 8:30 am
Wow. Dramatic. Could have used a little more background, and you could've introduced the main character a little earlier. (Until you said his name was John, I couldn't tell it it was a boy or a girl). But the premise is good, and the story itself isn't bad:)
 

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