Steven

August 27, 2011
By DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Summary:

Della has always been stuck in the middle of the social ladder. And, for a while, her best friend Steven would suffer with her.
But when high school turns Steven into a popular guy's guy, Della starts to lose her best friend.
But, one night, she has the chance to get her best friend back. The only thing standing in her way is a girl named Sarah.
Can she get her Steven back? Or has she lost him forever to the lures of popularity?


Sarina D.

Steven


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Esperanza GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2012 at 7:51 pm
Esperanza GOLD, Twinsburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me 'sky's the limit' when there are footprints on the moon."

oh my gosh this is sooooooo good it's like ur painting a picture in my head and that's the sign of a really good writer!!!!

on Apr. 21 2012 at 5:49 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
Thanks so much!

on Apr. 21 2012 at 5:48 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
Thank you!

on Apr. 21 2012 at 5:47 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
Thanks! I appreciate the criticism and will definitely take it into account as I finally begin to edit it :)

on Apr. 21 2012 at 5:45 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
I'm adding more soon. I know it took a long time, but I'm finally catching up on all of my teen ink stuff.

on Apr. 21 2012 at 5:43 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
Thanks! I appreciate and was glad that it wasn't too expected.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 9:26 pm
C.L.Erins BRONZE, Nunn, Colorado
1 article 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
The past is like a pen. You can always cross it out, but you can never erase it. ( unless you have one of those special erasable pens and in that case... well you are lucky)

i like how she was brave enough to stick around after Sarah showed up I would have bolted when she stared crying nicely done :)

on Jan. 1 2012 at 4:13 pm
selahoverrated GOLD, Mt Sidney, Virginia
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i like how he couldnt decide, that was kind of jerkish but i liked how it turned out.

on Nov. 30 2011 at 11:42 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

More!!!!!!! Please more!!!!!

on Oct. 28 2011 at 7:35 pm
BrownEyedGirl GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
11 articles 2 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
If life were easy, where is the adventure?
If you never leap, you will never know what it is like to fly.

It was very good!  I enjoyed it!  I think it could have used a bit more detail, but it was simple enough that I loved it!  Hope you write more soon!

 


on Oct. 27 2011 at 5:10 pm
Bookworm1998 GOLD, Brampton, Other
17 articles 2 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Preserve your memories, keep them well; what you forget, you can never retell.

at first, i thought it was a total cliche how it was gonna work out, but then it totally twisted and i loved that! good on you for a surprise climatic point. :)

on Sep. 10 2011 at 12:50 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
Thanks so much. And no, but I did kind of have a dream about it so I embelished it because I liked its concept. Thanks again. :)

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 2:47 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

GREAT!!:). is this based on a true story?

on Sep. 3 2011 at 11:32 am
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
Thanks glad you liked it so much!!

on Sep. 1 2011 at 7:32 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

Love ittttt

 





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