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Sarina D.
Steven
Summary: Della has always been stuck in the middle of the social ladder. And, for a while, her best friend Steven would suffer with her.
But when high school turns Steven into a popular guy's guy, Della starts to lose her best friend.
But, one night, she has the chance to get her best friend back. The only thing standing in her way is a girl named Sarah.
Can she get her Steven back? Or has she lost him forever to the lures of popularity?





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C.L.Erins said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 9:26 pm:
i like how she was brave enough to stick around after Sarah showed up I would have bolted when she stared crying nicely done :)
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:49 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
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IT_WILL_RAIN said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 4:13 pm:
i like how he couldnt decide, that was kind of jerkish but i liked how it turned out.
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:48 pm :
Thank you!
 
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writerchik_123 said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 11:42 pm:
More!!!!!!! Please more!!!!!
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:45 pm :
I'm adding more soon. I know it took a long time, but I'm finally catching up on all of my teen ink stuff.
 
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BrownEyedGirl said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 7:35 pm:

It was very good!  I enjoyed it!  I think it could have used a bit more detail, but it was simple enough that I loved it!  Hope you write more soon!

 

 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:47 pm :
Thanks! I appreciate the criticism and will definitely take it into account as I finally begin to edit it :)
 
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Bookworm1998 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 5:10 pm:
at first, i thought it was a total cliche how it was gonna work out, but then it totally twisted and i loved that! good on you for a surprise climatic point. :)
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:43 pm :
Thanks! I appreciate and was glad that it wasn't too expected.
 
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DallysGrrl said...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 12:50 pm:
Thanks so much. And no, but I did kind of have a dream about it so I embelished it because I liked its concept. Thanks again. :)
 
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Thandiwe said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 2:47 pm:
GREAT!!:). is this based on a true story?
 
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LilLover5-15 said...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 7:32 pm:

Love ittttt

 

 
DallysGrrl replied...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 11:32 am :
Thanks glad you liked it so much!!
 
Esperanza replied...
Sept. 8, 2012 at 7:51 pm :
oh my gosh this is sooooooo good it's like ur painting a picture in my head and that's the sign of a really good writer!!!!
 
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