Stuck Between Two

July 9, 2011
By julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"


Summary:

Payton visits Pacific Valley beach again and meets this charming, handsome, smart, and funny beach boy. She's hoping that she will be able to pick up the pieces from last summers incident with the man she had fallen in love with and hopes to find him again and pick up where they had left off last summer.


Julia R.

Stuck Between Two


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on Sep. 23 2011 at 8:39 am
KJAngelAuthor SILVER, Holland, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
With understanding comes wisdom.

Reminder to myself. ch. 3. plz reply so i can get an email bout it cuz i luv it n im hurrying cuz the hours almost over. thx!!!

on Sep. 9 2011 at 4:33 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

Haha it was really good btw thanks for reading my story :)

on Aug. 22 2011 at 8:45 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

You better :D

on Aug. 22 2011 at 8:27 pm
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"

Aww hahah thanks! :) More will be up shortly! & I will :)

on Aug. 22 2011 at 8:27 pm
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"

I will definitely be sure to let you know :)

on Aug. 22 2011 at 7:51 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

Omg you have to make more the public demands it!!! LOL :D you should read some of my stories.

on Aug. 22 2011 at 8:36 am
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

Tell me when you get more chapters put up. :D 

on Aug. 22 2011 at 12:07 am
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"

Alright! Ill be sure to read it :) Please tell your friends or anyone you know to check out my story! Thanks <3

on Aug. 21 2011 at 6:28 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

Its up, and its called One little thing. :D

on Aug. 13 2011 at 10:37 pm
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"

Haha! Thanks! :) Glad you liked it! Yes, I will be writing more. It's taking time because I just started up school again and I don't have all the free time in one period class like I did last year when I was in Creative Writing & all I did was write all period lol. But I will definitely keep up on the story! I have another chapter or two written that I haven't put up yet. But I'll keep you updated! :) I'll definitely check out your story, let me know when it's up :)

on Aug. 10 2011 at 5:13 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

You better write more. Haha. Yes, that was amazing, you should check out my story when it goes up, not near as good as yours. 

on Jul. 16 2011 at 3:56 pm
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"

Thank you so much! Yeah, I noticed I write a lot of dialogue. I guess that's just how I come across with my stories. Haha. I appreciate the comment :)

SweetlySour said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 3:08 am
SweetlySour, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not afraid of storms for I'm learning how to sail my ship." - Louisa May Alcott
"Do what you feel in your heart to be right- for you'll be criticized anyway. You'll be damned if you do, and damned if you don't." - Eleanor Roosevelt

This is really good! I love the letters between Payton (adore the name, by the way) and Brayden. You've got a lot of dialogue here that would work well with a bit more description, though it stands fine by itself, too. Anyways, I loved this!

Wow!

~ Lindsey



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