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Unknown Fear

Nicole U.
Unknown Fear
Summary: "I hear noises. I hear a horrible piercing scream. It’s a voice I’ve never heard. I feel the warm tears flow down my face – or is it blood? I’m not sure. I move closer to the door. My body shakes and shivers. I see splashes of paint on the door. I get a closer look. It’s not paint.
I still hear voices. Screaming. Yelling. Shouting. They all differ but I can’t tell the difference. I hear cries of pain. It’s still all of a sudden. I just hear a scratch on the floor going further…… and further. I stay near the door listening. It feels like years are passing by. After a long while I hear footsteps. Hard footsteps. They come closer….. and closer…… closer. The door flings open. I scream." -Unknow Fear

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LordHelen said...
Jan. 18, 2014 at 8:41 pm
This is a great prologue. It did what most prologues are meant to do-grabbed my attention. Some prologues give backgrounds. But this one makes me want to see more of you're writing. Bravo.

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