Someone To Talk To

July 2, 2011
By MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 367 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds


Summary:

One Day In New York, NY:

Benjamin Nicholas Logan goes for a walk.

Finds girl in alley trying to commit suicide.

Talks for a bit.

Ben leaves and girl changes mind, decides not to commit suicide that day.



Talking her out of it. It's worked once for Ben. But will it work again? And again?


MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy

Someone To Talk To


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on Sep. 15 2011 at 6:34 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 367 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

Ah, thank you. I'm glad you've taken the time look at much of my work here on TI. Helps with the confidence, ya know? Well, I suppose I'm doing my job as a writer then if you have to keep on your toes and read every word carefully so you don't miss anything. :) Good, that's good, and thank you, once again.

on Sep. 14 2011 at 2:07 pm
A.PaigeTurner, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
You think that everybody hates you. You should really stop that.- A Good Friend

I usually speed read, but I can't when I read this story.  If I do, I'll miss something, and I don't want to.

on Aug. 23 2011 at 4:22 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 367 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

:) Thanks. It's not finished yet, because I'm thinking about making it into a full-blown story/noevl. However, it's going to take me a while to put the next chapter up, because the flashdrive with all my writing and drawings and stuff on it, stories and poems included, isn't working, and I think it will never work again. So I've got to figure out what to do with my stories, now.

on Aug. 23 2011 at 4:15 pm
flyingpinkgiraffes PLATINUM, Chardon, Ohio
24 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When in doubt, kill your main character." ~Me
"Worry is like a rocking chair. It will give you something to do, but it won't get you anywhere."

That was great.  I loved the ending, it really made me want to see what happened next.  Plus I'd be depressed if nothing good happened that whole chapter, it was sad.

on Jul. 22 2011 at 5:57 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 367 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

Thanks so much! Well, if it kept you in suspense, then it's doing it's job. :) Thanks again, and I'm working on Ch. 2 now. It's taking a biut longer than I expected, though, because I have had very little time to work on it lately.

on Jul. 22 2011 at 3:03 pm
-hannah- SILVER, --, Other
6 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The books that help you most are those which make you think that most. The hardest way of learning is that of easy reading; but a great book that comes from a great thinker is a ship of thought, deep freighted with truth and beauty."

your story is really good!!! It kept me in suspense and I didn't look away until I read the whole thing, you really should write more :)

on Jul. 12 2011 at 2:04 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 367 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

Brainstorming for ideas on chapter 2 right as I type. :) Thanks!

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on Jul. 12 2011 at 2:01 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 388 comments
Please...write more! :D


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