You and I

June 25, 2011
By ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Summary:

A girl (unnamed) has been friends with her best guy friend for what seems like forever. They've shared everything with one another. But then the times come when it seems that she and her best guy friend end up caring for one another as more than just friends, yet when one feels that way, the other doesn't, or the other doesn't know about the feelings. However, this time the girl is longing for him to really like her. Will it be a fairytale ending?


Anindita C.

You and I


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on Jul. 24 2013 at 9:27 am
abecedarian_scribe SILVER, Johannesburg, Other
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Favorite Quote:
In the end, it's not going to matter how many breaths you took, but how many moments took your breath away.

I love the was the way the story flows and the mix of things.its realistic and even though it seems very common I think of it as traditional and there are elements brought out in the book that are definitive refreshing

disney000 said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 11:13 pm
I really liked how the beginning flowed with the way that the character was thinking. It really felt real and I'm sure we all can relate to the topic of the book.

leekay said...
on Jul. 12 2012 at 11:28 am
felt very real, as if i was among someone's inner, personal thoughts.

LBKTD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 3:46 pm
yeah very suspenseful

sonJaNae said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:25 pm
sonJaNae, Fort Wainwright, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"No one can change a person, but someone can be a person's reason to change" -Spongebob Squarepants

Really Nice!!! A mix of things that kept me on edge! I loved it :D It would be great if you could check out my work! Any comments or ratings would be very appreciated!!

applejax said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:05 pm
i agree definitely

samirababy said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:11 pm
loving it!

ani70 said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:53 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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thanks I will definitely do that

ani70 said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:52 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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thank you!

ani70 said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:51 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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haha thank you for your comment! yes, in my recent story, I have definitely worked on the dialogue. can't wait to post my new story. but yeah. thank you!

razorbeam300 said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 8:10 pm
I read it and I like it. The dialogue in the phone call was a little confusing, but it was still understandable and felt like a real conversation. I liked this story over all, it felt like I was reading someone's journal and that was cool.

razorbeam300 said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 8:10 pm
I read it and I like it. The dialogue in the phone call was a little confusing, but it was still understandable and felt like a real conversation. I liked this story over all, it felt like I was reading someone's journal and that was cool.

RoxSarah said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 3:57 pm
pretty good!

JimmyS456 said...
on Nov. 12 2011 at 10:47 am
nice job! keep it up

ani70 said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:32 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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glad to know! thank you!

emily said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 11:05 am
really good i like the ending

ani70 said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 5:52 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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thank you!

abk_khn said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 5:54 pm
good stuff!

ani70 said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 8:26 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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thanks! i most defninitely will.

kiwiiiiii said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:31 pm
nice story!!!!! write more plz


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