Away From Tragedy

March 18, 2011
By TheGoodTwin, Fort Mill, South Carolina
TheGoodTwin, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them.

--Shakespeare


Summary:

Anna has had a stressful life with her parents always at her back. But one single moment in history changes that. She ends up going back in time for one single scene in her life. What happens there changes her, in a small, but big way.


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Away From Tragedy


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TheGoodTwin said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 4:19 pm
TheGoodTwin, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them.

--Shakespeare

Oops! typo. i meant i couldn't find it

TheGoodTwin said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 4:16 pm
TheGoodTwin, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them.

--Shakespeare

Thank you so much!!!! That feels great, especially because one of my friends didn't like it much. :( 

Well thanks, and i tried to find your story but i could seem to find it. 

And yes, it is actually a short story, but short story wasn't an option to file it under. 

Just a random question: 

What did you like about it???


on Mar. 22 2011 at 3:17 pm
rainbowwaffles BRONZE, Stony Brook, New York
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I really liked this! :) I think your writing style is great, and your imagery is really good.

I'm not sure if I would consider it a novel, though, probably more a short story. You should also check your punctuation regarding the dialogue. I'm not sure what the relevance of the second chapter was, but it fit in nicely, anyway.

Keep writing! (Well, I don't mean continuing this, considering that ending was very final.)

If you have the chance, could you please check out my realistic fiction novel, The Formation, and let me know what you think? Thanks :)



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