The Social Class Beast

January 6, 2011
By Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg


Summary:

Misti was sitting in class one day when KC walked in. He wore black and red, with make-up and piercings. He acted rude and self absorbed. But she never judged a book by the cover before... Forced to work on a class project together, the two teens slowly begin to understand each other and form a relationship.


Vanendra

The Social Class Beast


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GeeGi BRONZE said...
on May. 16 2012 at 10:43 pm
GeeGi BRONZE, Park City, Utah
3 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Being crazy isn't enough.”
― Dr. Seuss

“Why fit in when you were born to stand out?”
― Dr. Seuss

This is AMAZING! I absolutly love the plot and the way you describe it! EXCELLENT! Hey if you don't mind, could you read my book? It's called Demoness. I would greatly appreciate it.

exotus SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 1:20 pm
exotus SILVER, Aspen, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If a writer falls in love with you, you can never die"

I only read chapter 1. No offense, but I thought of your descriptions of high school as descriptions of middle school. They were childish and judgemental. people aren't in those particular groups in High school anymore because (keyword) we've GROWN UP

on Apr. 16 2012 at 6:57 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Ok I have revised the begining of this story and will post better chapters in a bit.

on Jan. 9 2012 at 6:58 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

new chapter posted!! I know its short, but im still editing the first 12 chapters.

on Jan. 3 2012 at 6:38 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I know everyone's anxious to find out what happens next. I'm sorry I didn't put any new chapters up yet, I was on winter break. Tomorrow I'm posting some new chapters and I hope you get to read them soon after...As for your poem, I'll read them soon!! ^-^

on Dec. 29 2011 at 1:05 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 36 comments
i literally check for more every other day! i love this so much! Keep up the amazing writing! please check out my poem, too!

on Dec. 16 2011 at 6:47 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I'm gonna add more on Monday ^-^

IMme2 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 9:33 am
IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
just be yourself not some one your not.
- unknown

U MUST ADD MORE NOW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 12 2011 at 6:37 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I will this weekend :D

on Dec. 12 2011 at 6:36 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

thank you, I'll try my best to revise and finish it ^-^

on Dec. 9 2011 at 5:54 pm
UNserieswriter, New York
0 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
idk my bff jill

AMAZING! please read mine too!!!!!!

 


on Dec. 7 2011 at 8:32 am
Acts1338 PLATINUM, Audubon, Iowa
25 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth is, everyone is going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for."-Bob Marley

Yeah, I know what that's like. Kinda hard to finish them too, but this story is really good. You should really try to finish it. :)

on Dec. 7 2011 at 6:39 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thats fine, I know what you mean about everything kind of happening all at once. This is just a rough draft, right now I'm taking my time to edit all of the chapters and soon It should become a clearer story line.

on Dec. 6 2011 at 8:18 pm
Acts1338 PLATINUM, Audubon, Iowa
25 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth is, everyone is going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for."-Bob Marley

I like this story a lot but I think you've got to many variables going at the moment without entirely connecting them in my opinion. Like her dad rapes her, Bentley's eyes change, she's having weird dreams that are coming true, Bentley (newly meeting her) is going to buy her an expensive dress, and you've got the building tension with KC..sorry to be overcritical but it might be hard to some readers to still follow and remember that Bentley and KC are from the beginning too (that's what i got from it anyway, sorry if any of that's wrong)

on Dec. 5 2011 at 6:33 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Thanks!! and don't worry, there will be more soon! :D

Jeera SILVER said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 10:17 pm
Jeera SILVER, Dowelltown, Tennessee
5 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay strong; be real.

I love everything about this! There needs to be more :)

on Nov. 23 2011 at 6:48 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

thank you!!! I was watching it the other day too xD ...new chapters will be posted next week ^-^

wilderose121 said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 12:48 pm
This is amazing! "Bitter, sweet and strange/ Finding you can change/ Learning you were wrong." sorry but i watched Beauty and The Beast the other night and this is just.....wow!! update!

on Nov. 17 2011 at 6:35 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Definately!!! xD

on Nov. 16 2011 at 9:55 pm
clover201 BRONZE, Milladore, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 4 comments
Anyone who wears dinosaur footie-pajamas is obviously cool.




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