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Katja lives in a secluded world, aware of only her family, the villagers she lives with, and the forest they live in. Little does she know that the village hides a dark secret, one none of them are aware of.

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msvorinic said...
Jun. 24, 2016 at 2:13 pm
Great story! It seems you have put a lot of hard work into it!
lifeisgood said...
Feb. 25, 2015 at 6:11 pm
i was a little confused by the jumps between the characters. it wasnt very clear
Haloclines replied...
Feb. 25, 2015 at 6:12 pm
Sorry about that, it was more clear on microsoft, where I could use italics.
!sunshine? said...
Feb. 18, 2015 at 6:03 pm
I dont understand where the title came from
Haloclines replied...
Feb. 18, 2015 at 6:04 pm
this was originally a faust story, with a sad ending, but it has evolved since then.
theo.hux2ble replied...
Feb. 20, 2015 at 5:29 pm
you must have been writing this for a long time then.
Haloclines replied...
Feb. 20, 2015 at 7:02 pm
Yeah, I have been.
serasurfer.4 said...
Feb. 18, 2015 at 6:01 pm
found this while doing some research, best thing I accidentally read.
Haloclines replied...
Feb. 23, 2015 at 6:05 pm
what on earth where you looking up?
Haloclines said...
Feb. 18, 2015 at 5:46 pm
It's supposed to be like the middle of Siberia, but I've never been there so I'm not sure if I did it justice.
Chemlo T. said...
Feb. 18, 2015 at 5:44 pm
where do they live? is it a random place somewhere on the globe, or like a different dimension?
su4nshinegirl345 said...
Feb. 15, 2015 at 3:49 pm
Is there symbolism behind Joshua?becuz I feel like there is but Im not sure what.
Haloclines replied...
Feb. 17, 2015 at 6:35 pm
Yes there is, joshua can be traced back to Jesus, and he is a Christ figure
Chemlo T. replied...
Feb. 26, 2015 at 6:07 pm
That's really cool.
bandlover3734 said...
Feb. 14, 2015 at 3:46 pm
The relationships were great, normally there is a boyfriend/girlfriend love thing, but the only love outside family love was a crush that the boy didn't know about.
Chemlo T. replied...
Feb. 18, 2015 at 5:42 pm
the relationships were a refreshing change, I normally feel like most writers dont think that another type of love exists outside of a lusty love, but this was different.
Haloclines replied...
Feb. 23, 2015 at 6:06 pm
I did that on purpose.
emilee1483 said...
Feb. 12, 2015 at 7:26 pm
Is there symbolism hidden in this story?
Haloclines replied...
Feb. 23, 2015 at 6:07 pm
Yes, there is a lot, but I can't tell you where it is, you have to find it on your own.
Haloclines said...
Jan. 31, 2015 at 11:30 pm
Thank you so much for your comments.

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