The Kings Promise

August 8, 2013
By Anonymous

Summary:

When Henry, the future king of Linderservia chooses to marry his destined wife, Cassandra of Salzt, more changes then his lack of self confidence. Through battle on the battlefield and within his own heart, Henry battles an obsession that has plagued his forefathers and his own mind since childhood. Together, the royal pair, suffer from the effect of Henry's loyalty to his obsessive dream, an unstoppable dream that had been ground into Linderservia by legend and fate since the land's beginnings. In the end, all pay the price, Henry's prospering land, his people, his loved ones, Cassandra, the fate of his children, and most of all, himself.


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on Aug. 17 2013 at 9:55 pm
Wow, I am super impressed!  Such imagination and beautiful description!  I feel like I am right there in the almost magical land...keep writing because I want to know what happens next!!

Catherine said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:46 pm
Love it! Such an unexpected plot twist...

Curlyque12 said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:49 am
Curlyque12, SLC, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see in the world"

No thank you and no prob ! Happy writing!

on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:45 am
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Thanks again! Especially for the critique. (:I agree with it.

Curlyque12 said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:43 am
Curlyque12, SLC, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see in the world"

Aha! I am glad to see who the author is! No problem. It really is good work. The end was very shocking and I applaud you. My only critique is that sometimes certain words didn't seem to fit exactly, BUT I thought it wonderfully done...obviously .

on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:39 am
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Thank you so much ! That means so much. I have certainly been thinking...ahem, working...on a sequel

Curlyque12 said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:35 am
Curlyque12, SLC, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see in the world"

I mean, it was just very imaginative and gripping once I got into it. Keep up the good work! And I truly hope to see a sequel someday.

Curlyque12 said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:24 am
Curlyque12, SLC, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see in the world"

Please write a sequel??

Lizzysees said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:00 am
I really did enjoy this novel . I am still thinking about and all that happened. Really, good job!

LizzySees said...
on Aug. 15 2013 at 10:56 pm
Wow. This was so good. Like, I could not put it down. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL. :D

E.Lee said...
on Aug. 15 2013 at 10:52 pm
Very well done. I love the descriptions and characterization. I could feel an actual sense of where I was and could feel a constant foreboding. Once I reached the second chapter, I was on a roll. I would suggest it to many and do.




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