The Kings Promise

August 8, 2013
By Anonymous

Summary:

When Henry, the future king of Linderservia chooses to marry his destined wife, Cassandra of Salzt, more changes then his lack of self confidence. Through battle on the battlefield and within his own heart, Henry battles an obsession that has plagued his forefathers and his own mind since childhood. Together, the royal pair, suffer from the effect of Henry's loyalty to his obsessive dream, an unstoppable dream that had been ground into Linderservia by legend and fate since the land's beginnings. In the end, all pay the price, Henry's prospering land, his people, his loved ones, Cassandra, the fate of his children, and most of all, himself.


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The Kings Promise


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on Nov. 3 2013 at 1:54 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Thank you everyone, for the comments. I love receiving comments. (:

Sammi said...
on Oct. 29 2013 at 12:55 am
I liked this, though it left me heartbroken. Good job! (': sequel plz?

JohnJoseph said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 10:43 pm
Good job honey. Loved it and read it in one sitting. I am very proud.

on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:46 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Yup :3 anytime (:

Pinkblue said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:45 pm
Pinkblue, NYC, New York
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them"-Walt Disney

Thank you. (:

on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:44 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Nice!! (: I bet they'll be great!

Pinkblue said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:43 pm
Pinkblue, NYC, New York
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them"-Walt Disney

Yea, No prob. Thank you. Im working on some songs write now.

on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:41 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Thanks again! I hope to read something of yours soon. Everyone can write (:

Pinkblue said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:39 pm
Pinkblue, NYC, New York
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them"-Walt Disney

Yea. Well, it was very well done. It did take me a minute to get into it, but once I did, obviously I liked it. Good job. SO good. <3

on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:37 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Haha I don't know, it's too early to tell.

Pinkblue said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:36 pm
Pinkblue, NYC, New York
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them"-Walt Disney

How about making it into a triology? All good things are singles or trilogies.

on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:35 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

I'm glad you think so. Yep ! I plan on there being a sequel.

Pinkblue said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:33 pm
Pinkblue, NYC, New York
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them"-Walt Disney

Yea. That is a very true point. So ARE you planning on a sequel? It could happen I think, personnaly.

on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:32 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Oh thanks! Reading is a good inspiration though isn't ? Haha the author who tends to inspire me is Anya Seton. She's so good. Some say the inspiration should just come to you naturally but I don't know about that.

Pinkblue said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:29 pm
Pinkblue, NYC, New York
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them"-Walt Disney

Oh really? That is so cool. I can see how that could inspire you. That's cool that it did, since it's such a small little inspiration. I usually have to read in order to get any inspiration.

on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:27 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Well, I learned about these tapestries iny French class that no one knows the story of. I thought that was interesting and kind of went crazy haha .

Pinkblue said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:25 pm
Pinkblue, NYC, New York
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them"-Walt Disney

Yea. It was good. What inspired you to write it?

on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:24 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

Thanks a million Pinkblue! I'm gals it inspired you so much.

Pinkblue said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:18 pm
Pinkblue, NYC, New York
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them"-Walt Disney

I read this before I decided to get an account, and honestly, it inspired me too. Though I am not much of a writer, I would like to be! So this was pretty good. You should be proud of it. I loved the ending.

Peggy said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 2:25 pm
Prose well crafted.  Interesting reading.  Story line intriguing.  Writer has great potential.  High imagination level.  Keep at it.   




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