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HARRY POTTER CONTINUED

January 8, 2011
By TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
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Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"


Summary:

This starts right after the last page of the book but before the epilogue. This talks about all the things that happened in between them finishing Voldemort and then as adults. Included: How everyone gets married, the kids of course, and the fast-paced adventure of finding and capturing the remaining Death Eaters and followers.


Kristin S.

HARRY POTTER CONTINUED


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on Aug. 14 2011 at 6:48 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
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Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

I LOVE HARRY POTTER TOO!!!!!!!!! And thanks so much I'll check it out ASAP :)

on Aug. 14 2011 at 6:47 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thank you so much!!!!! :)

OKgirl said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 4:07 pm
You know, the spell she put on her parents to make them forget. She said in the seventh one that she would track them down and lift the spell.

on Aug. 8 2011 at 11:18 am
Terminal_Laziness PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

I LOVE HARRY POTTER!!! wow that was sooo kewl! I very nice piece of work! great job! I just posted a new story i wrote called: Alien invasion series book one: the caller. If any of u had time please go check it out and post feedback and comments. It would be much appreciated! Thanks! and keep writing everyone! :)(:

on Aug. 4 2011 at 11:28 pm
BellaTrixster, Fort Richardson, Alaska
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We're taking turns now? I think it should be Eric's personally.

It's really good!!! Keep writing! I love it!!! And I love the Harry Potter series, so it was good to see someone who could write closely to J.K. Rowling! Good luck! And keep a writing!!!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 11:47 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Oh god you're right. Thank you!!!!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 11:47 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Yeah, you're right. It'd make the story flow a bit better. And I kinda had to put in the random Malfoy scene (sorry!) because it's basically the main lead in to what they're going to do next. But thanks for taking the time to read! I really appreciate it and stay posted in for more soon! :)

on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:37 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Griphook died in the series!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:15 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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I'm only about halfway though but I love it! Some things I believe need tending to:

1) the dialogue is sketchy at times. Maybe you should try saying who says lot a little more often.

2) when characters have thoughts, it'd be less confusing if you clarified whose thoughts they were and maybe put them in some sort of quotations?

3) I just finished reading the chapter with Malfoy and I think he random appearing was awkward and how he just openly discussed the Death Eaters with Harry without finding some sort of positive ground in which Harry would definetely not turn him in. 

 

Well that's all I've got for now! I'm going to keep on reading because I think it's marvelous. Good luck with the rest of your writing!


on Jul. 21 2011 at 12:19 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thanks so much! (: and I will

cathy1998 said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:21 am
this is amazing u writing is great next chapter please

on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:24 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Lift the spell? What spell...? Lol

 

But thanks so much, I will!


on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:23 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thank you so much! I think you'll love the wedding :)

OKgirl said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 10:41 am
Hold on, I thought Hermione was going to lift the spell after Voldemort's downfall. But other than that, the passion was amazing and really moving. I really loved it and please continue writing!

on Jun. 22 2011 at 4:14 pm
tajoines24 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
3 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've missed more than 9000 shots in my career. I've lossed almost 300 games. 26 times I've been trusted to take the game winning shot and missed. I've failed over and over again in my life. And that is why I suceed."
-Michael Jordan

This was very well written! I cant wait to see how well ron and hermiones wedding will be!!!Keep writing please!And please check out my work too!

on May. 24 2011 at 4:22 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thanks girl!! (:

on May. 24 2011 at 4:22 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

I didn't claim the whole series to be mine! All I claim is this, and that has nothing to do with copyright issues. I looked it up. But thank you. 

Bka341997 GOLD said...
on May. 24 2011 at 11:04 am
Bka341997 GOLD, Bigfork, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take our breath away!

Im debating wether i shoul like it o not. A book/series should end were the author left it. If i wrote something and someone wrote another book to go with it i woud be mad.Plus copyright. The people dont sound the same in your writing but you have a good idea with in. Nice imagination to finish a story. But I dont know if you should have. :) its okaythough

 


on May. 24 2011 at 12:06 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Hi just last night during dinner, i went, "i need a harry potter sequel" and there you were.

AH-MAZING.

Do you mind checkin out my work, "the diary of a teenaged lunatic" and maybe leave some feedback?


on May. 16 2011 at 11:40 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thanks so much! :D