Rat Key

October 13, 2011
By milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."


Summary:

A man who has forgotten his name arrived in a city where he had no choice but to become a thief if he wanted to live. Every time he was caught stealing, the police would chase him, calling "Rat!" over and over again. Due to his lack of a regular name, he adopted the name Rat.
Rat went to live in the Tunnels, which is an enormous and elaborate maze of tunnels that run underneath the futuristic city of Maw. The unfortunate thing; that's where all of the gangs reside. Rat has no interest in joining a gang, so they don't exactly like him down there, but then again, they don't exactly like on the Surface either.


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Rat Key


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JennayBean said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:37 pm
JennayBean, Phillipsburg, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Believe In Yourself!!!

of course:P

JennayBean said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:36 pm
JennayBean, Phillipsburg, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Believe In Yourself!!!

anytime!......

..alllllllllllllllll the time...... O.o


on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:35 pm
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

It should, Jenny

JennayBean said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:34 pm
JennayBean, Phillipsburg, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Believe In Yourself!!!

:P thanks dude.

JennayBean said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:34 pm
JennayBean, Phillipsburg, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Believe In Yourself!!!

this right here? it makes me shmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiile;]

on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:33 pm
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

And again. Good to see you didn't forget about this account like I thought you would :) no offense

on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:33 pm
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

Thanks again Jenny

on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:32 pm
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

Thanks Jenny...

JennayBean said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:20 pm
JennayBean, Phillipsburg, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Believe In Yourself!!!

can't wait for more!!!!

JennayBean said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:19 pm
JennayBean, Phillipsburg, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Believe In Yourself!!!

I LOVE RAT KEY!!!

JennayBean said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 5:19 pm
JennayBean, Phillipsburg, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Believe In Yourself!!!

MILFORCE IS THE BEST! 

on Nov. 6 2011 at 8:26 pm
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

I see you finally got around to getting an account here, Taylor :)

on Nov. 6 2011 at 8:26 pm
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

Thanks so much!

on Nov. 6 2011 at 7:25 pm
RatKeyFanatict, Baltomor, Maryland
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This book is really cool!!!

on Nov. 6 2011 at 7:25 am
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

Thanks so much! I'll have the third chapter up soon!

on Nov. 5 2011 at 10:49 pm
StrangeJade PLATINUM, Relative Obscurity, California
36 articles 17 photos 391 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is so beautiful that death has fallen in love with it." - Life of Pi

(I'm so sorry it took me so long to comment... so much homework... PowerPoint of death.... blaaaaah.... but anyway.)

 

I only had time to read Chapter one right now, but I'm really enjoying it! The characters' syntax is fluid and believable, and the world seems very well-developed. There are a few grammar errors and some bits where the story slows down a tad too much, but these are relatively minor. All in all, it's a really promising story, and I look forward to more of it and more of the witty narrative voice! :)


on Nov. 3 2011 at 7:16 am
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the 'well' joke. Honestly, I had to think about writing it because I was getting confused!

on Nov. 3 2011 at 7:15 am
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

Thanks a bunch!

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 6:09 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

I loved this chapter and how you introduced all the gangs! The "well" joke was really funny, too. Keep it up!

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 6:08 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

Wow! I'm already hooked! I love how you started with an action scene to keep the reader excited!




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