The Devils Twin

September 9, 2013
By A-Chan, las vegas, Nevada
A-Chan, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Summary:

Sora just wants to be herself? Fighting constant enemies that want her dead.Meeting new people that make her want to live. She has to either kill or be killed. While Sousake just wants to make Sora happy. But will he sacrifice his own to let her move on. Join their journey through heartache,fun, and adventure.


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The Devils Twin


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on Nov. 1 2013 at 6:45 pm
No problem :) I hope it's going well!

A-Chan said...
on Nov. 1 2013 at 3:45 pm
A-Chan, Las Vegas, Nevada
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 Thanks alot :)

on Oct. 7 2013 at 8:44 pm
Hi, A-Chan! I read this and I think it is a great idea and it is good for a first novel. The only thing I see wrong with it is that you need to make paragraphs, which lets us know we can take a breath. Otherwise we get confused and we're not sure where the pauses should be. If someone speaks, the next person to speak should be in the next paragraph. I'm not good at explaining this :P but if you look at some published novels you'll understand better. Use their form as a guideline and your writing will improve. <3 Just fix that and keep writing this story! Best of luck. ^_^

A-Chan said...
on Sep. 18 2013 at 9:56 am
A-Chan, Las Vegas, Nevada
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should i add more this is my first novel it might not be any good 




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