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Rise of the Elites

Rise of the Elites

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Mantisman630This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 6:31 pm
I like it, keep it more mysterious and shadowy and drag on the reader's inquisitve nature to succeed. One suggestion, try to maybe pull the sections together into a few chapters, I know I have that issue as well with my book, "Vectors of Corruption," where I have hit 29 Chapters without really saying much more than necessary! Just try to squeeze them together instead of splitting them apart into differentiated sections.

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