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Pitch Black

August 26, 2011
By daniec SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
daniec SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Dancing faces you towards heaven which ever way you turn. Dance for Christ because you can...

I see nothing because there’s nothing there. I feign for the light at the end of the tunnel but I don’t see it. I feel like I’m running in circles. Why Me! Why must I feel empty inside again? May be its because I’ve held something so precious to me so close to my heart for so long that I have unconditional love for it. Then it starts to forget about me and dangles me over the edge. I plead with it but it doesn’t care and drops me I feel myself leaving its grasp until I fall helplessly. I scream but nothing comes out it can’t hear me. I see its face start to disappear until its nothing. Darkness surrounds me. Nothing is there, nothing but Pitch Black.

The author's comments:
This poem was written based on how you sometimes feel at the end of a relationship. When you are still in love with him but he doesnt love or care about you anymore and can care less about you.

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