Take me with you

Put me in a place,
just you and me,
somewere where we can get lost,
in eachothers arms,
and were we can drown in words,
were we cant breath no more,
like those kisses of yours,
that make me feel like one million fireworks
just blew up in my heart





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WRI teacher ING said...
Oct. 4, 2011 at 2:27 pm
I think that this is great, add specific sensory details! "drown in words" is my favorite part.
 
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