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Every time you say those words, I fall. I have to stand back and swallow all the hate that I feel inside. He says those words to you its like dying. Not knowing what is going to happen now. But then I get back up and swallow all the hate I fell inside. I can’t deny my love for you. Every time I say it I get this feeling in my gut, next thing you know he says those words. But I have to stand back up and swallow all the hate I feel inside. Not towards you, not towards him but, to myself for not trying sooner. But then I have to stand back up and swallow all the hate I feel inside.





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Ash_xo said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 8:07 am

Nice, well written ;) 

keep it up 

 
xXRAMIREZx006Xx replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 9:46 am

Thanks a lot. It means a lot.

I just wrote something 2 days ago. Everybody says the like it a lot. so just keep checking back.

 
Ash_xo replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 6:30 am

great, i'll check it out. :]

i wrote an article that got published a few days ago plz check that out too! 

 
emmacxoxoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 12:19 am
this is really really good...very emotional, i lik it a lot :)
 
xXRAMIREZx006Xx replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 8:53 pm
Thanks it means a lot.
 
JessicaBee said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 3:14 am

This is really good, :) Nice job.

 

 
xXRAMIREZx006Xx replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 6:15 pm

Thanks a lot. I'm waiting for something else to be posted as well.

 

 
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