What I feel inside.....

July 17, 2010
By H-RAM BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
H-RAM BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
A strong man stands up for him self, A stronger man stands up for others.


Every time you say those words, I fall. I have to stand back and swallow all the hate that I feel inside. He says those words to you its like dying. Not knowing what is going to happen now. But then I get back up and swallow all the hate I fell inside. I can’t deny my love for you. Every time I say it I get this feeling in my gut, next thing you know he says those words. But I have to stand back up and swallow all the hate I feel inside. Not towards you, not towards him but, to myself for not trying sooner. But then I have to stand back up and swallow all the hate I feel inside.



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H-RAM BRONZE said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 8:53 pm
H-RAM BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
A strong man stands up for him self, A stronger man stands up for others.

Thanks it means a lot.

Ash_xo said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 6:30 am

great, i'll check it out. :]

i wrote an article that got published a few days ago plz check that out too! 


H-RAM BRONZE said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 9:46 am
H-RAM BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
A strong man stands up for him self, A stronger man stands up for others.

Thanks a lot. It means a lot.

I just wrote something 2 days ago. Everybody says the like it a lot. so just keep checking back.


Ash.x BRONZE said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 8:07 am
Ash.x BRONZE, Swansea,Wales, Other
1 article 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All changes, even the most longed for, have their melancholy; for what we leave behind us is a part of ourselves; we must die to one life before we can enter another."

Nice, well written ;) 

keep it up 


on Aug. 12 2010 at 12:19 am
emmacxoxo PLATINUM, Chelsea, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Okay. Okay.

this is really really good...very emotional, i lik it a lot :)

H-RAM BRONZE said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 6:15 pm
H-RAM BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
A strong man stands up for him self, A stronger man stands up for others.

Thanks a lot. I'm waiting for something else to be posted as well.

 


on Aug. 11 2010 at 3:14 am
JessicaBee BRONZE, Bellevue, Washington
3 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
" To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment "

This is really good, :) Nice job.

 





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