Marry Me

November 29, 2008
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LONG BLACK DRESS THAT CARESSES MY BODY IN EVERY WAVE.
LONG SILVER EARRINGS THAT SEEM TO REFLECT THE DAY.
OPEN TOED FOR INCH HEELS WRAPPED AROND MY NEATLY PAINTED TOES PULLIN MY HAIR BACK IM READY TO GO.

WHERE IS HE?
IS HE COMING AT ALL OR IS HE LIKE OTHER MEN JST WAITING TO SEE ME FALL WILL HE TEAR PICK AND RIP BC LATELY I HAVENT HAD TIME FOR THIS RELATIONSHIP.

MY ANXIETY COMES TO A HAULT WHEN THE MAN OF MY DREAMS WALKS INTO THE ROOM.HE FOUND ME AND A SMILE CAME ACROSS HIS FACE THAT SEEMED ALL THE WHILE FROM EAR TO EAR.

HEY HE SAID AS HE BRUSHED HIS SOFT LIPS AGAINST MY CHEEK SORRY I HAD TO PUT CAMILLE TO SLEEP.
WHAT DID YOU NEED THAT WAS SUCH AN EMERGENCY THAT WE HAD TO DO THIS TONIGHT.
JENENE -I LOVE YOU WEVE BEEN THROUGH SO MUCH TOGETHER AS HE PAUSED I FELT THE NEED TO TELL HIM TO PROCEED,WHEN HE DID IT WAS WITH FORTITUDE.
JANENE LET ME TAKE CARE OF YOU LIKE I KNOW I CAN
BUT THATS ONLY IF YOU AGREE TO SPEND THE REST OF YOUR LIFE WITH ME
HE GOT DOWN ON ONE KNEE JANENE - MARRY ME

MY VISION WAS AS CLEARER AS I LOOK IN THE MIRROR.
I ONCE AGAIN DECIDED THAT THIS IS WAT I WANTED TO DO.

I STARTED TO CRY AS I IN VISIONED MYSELF
THE DOORS THAT I WOULD WALK THROUGH IT WOULD FOREVER CHANGE MY LIFE I WAS GOING TO BE HIS WIFE.

ITS ALL BEAUTIFUL WITH MY BROTHER BY MYSIDE.
BRIAN AT THE ALTAR STARING AT HIS BEAUTIFUL BRIDE.
THE FLOWERS THAT BLOOMED SO BEAUTIFULLY THAT EVEN THE
DEPATURE OF THE PRESENCE BETWEEN THE STEM AND THE BUD
OF THE ROSE IT THE PETALS NEVER LOST THEIR ESSENCE.

I WALKED DOWN THE ISLE ALMOST RELUCTANTLY IT SEEMED.
HE WATCHED ME AS I WATCHED HIM BOTH REMENISING ON OUR FIRST KISS FIRST SIGHT, IT WAS SO RIGHT THAT TWINKLE IN HIS EYE
THAT COULDNT BE CAUSED BY LIGHT.

MY DESTINED FAMILY AND HIS SIT TOGETHERON THE ACCOUNT OF A MAN WHO LOVES A WOMAN JUST ENOUGH- UNCODITIONALLY
HE PULLED MY VAIL FROM PON MY FACE.
THE PASTOR RETURNED TO HIS RESERVED PLACE IN THE BIBLE
"WE ARE GATHERED HERE TODAY "
I NOR HE WAS LISTENING FACES GLISINING WITH TEARS
AND EXCITEMENT
THROUGH MY MANY YEARS I HAD FINALLY HAD SOMEONE TO SPEND THE REST OF MY LIFE WITH.

JANENE MICHELE SMITH,DO YOU TAKE THIS MAN TO BE YOUR LAWFUL WEDDED HUSBAND, I DO I SAID LOOKING INTO HIS EYES I REALLY DO.
SHALL THERE BE ANYONE WHO AGAINST THESE TWO JOINING TOGETHER IN HOLY MATRIMONY.

SUDDENLY THE DOORS OF THE CHURCH FLEW OPEN EXSPOSING THE SKY BLUE THERE STOOD AN UNFAMILIAR WOMAN SHE SAID I DO
MOMMYYYYYYY!CALLED CAMILLE RUNNING TO JUMP IN THIS WOMANS ARMS
WHILE THE WHOLE CHURCH ESPECIALLY ME STOOD ALARMED.
SILENCE FELL UPON THE ROOM AS SHE WALKED TWARD THE UNSUSPECTING BRIDE AND GROOM.
SHE PUT CAMILLE ON HER FEET SHE REPEATS I DO
JANENE SAYS:MIGHT I ASK WHO IN THE HELL R U
BRIAN/GROOM:KEISHA WAT R U DOIN HERE
KEISHA/EXWIFE:WELL THATS NOT THE ANSWER I EXSPECTED AFTER ALL THESE YEARS.SHE REPLIED AS SHE WIPED AWAY HER TEARS.
JANENE/BRIDE:SOMEBODY BETTER START EXSPLAINING BRIAN IM NOT PLAYIN.
BRIAN:BABY KEISHA IS MY EXWIFE,I THOUGHT I GOT HER OUT OF MY LIFE
KEISHA:BRIAN PLEASE DONT MARRY HER
JANENE:SOMEBODY COME AND GET THIS HELFIER
BRIAN:KEISHA ITS OVER,YOU DONT HAVE SENSE ENOUGH NOT TO DO THIS IN FRONT OF OUR DAUGHTER
KEISHA:BRIAN WE CAN WORK THIS OUT
BRIAN:KEISHA GET OUT
JANENE:SHE FIN TO GET HIT IN THE MOUTH
KEISHA:BRIAN IM PREGNANT
BRIAN:AND WAT THAT GOT TO DO WIT ME
KEISHA:YOURE THE DADDY





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another.hopeless.romantic said...
today at 3:09 pm
I loved it! Great story, oh, how I love cliff-hangers. One problem though, what's with the all caps? It's like you were screaming the hole thing! It makes it a little bit hard to read. Were there technical difficulties?
 
Aaliyah02 said...
Apr. 5, 2016 at 11:56 am
Okay I think you could make this better... It needs some major editing.
 
thatbloggingDirectionergirl said...
Mar. 13, 2013 at 4:27 pm
This needs major editing for spelling and grammar mistakes. And why is it in all caps? Also, shouldn't this be in the poetry section?
 
FallingForYourEyes replied...
Mar. 13, 2013 at 6:16 pm
ahah thats exactly what i was thinking when i was reading it. . .
 
ImNotCrazy said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 3:50 pm
lol awesome there needs 2 b a part 2
 
Jenniraffe<3 said...
May 22, 2010 at 12:32 pm
I love this! I want more!
 
BrittanyHale said...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 11:05 am
OH EM GEE!!!!
How long has she been the ex wife???
That was freaking awesome!!!
 
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