A Day In The Mind Of A LoveStruck Teenage Girl

September 9, 2010
By Silence-Is-My-Virtue GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
Silence-Is-My-Virtue GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"The sentence below this is false.
The sentence above this is true.
Try to figure that out." -- unknown


Wake up, try not to fall over. Brighten up when he comes to mind. Get ready happily.
Put on makeup as carefully as possible. Choose the perfect outfit. Hope like crazy he will notice.
Eat breakfast—try not to think of him. Think of him and get lovesick feeling.
Harder to eat anything now.
Finish breakfast, walk to school.
Think of him.
Listen to iPod. Sad song comes on.
Think of him.
Arrive at school.
Hope he’s not absent.
First period.
Sit in first period hoping to see him in the hall. Think about how he has none of the same classes. Sad feeling deep inside. Heart skips a beat.
First period over.
Go to locker, see him on the way. He smiles. Smile, smile, smile back, dummy!
Second period.
Sit through boring lectures, try to read book. Romance story in book. Try not to picture it with him. Fail miserably. Longing in heart. Missing him terribly.
Second period over.
Walk to third period, see him on your way. He says hi. Say hi. Heart skips a beat.
Third Period.
Only four classes a day.
Almost done.
Running in gym, use him as a motivation. Works out perfectly. Smile and get changed.
Third period over.
Don’t see him on the way to fourth period. Sad feeling in heart. Dead weight dragging heart down.
Fourth period.
Last class. Think about him all the time. Don’t pay attention to teacher’s lecturing. Might see him after school. Just one glimpse.
Fourth period over in a snap.
School’s out.
Head to locker.
See him there waiting for you.
What could this be?
Get stuff out of locker. He talks casual. Talk casual right back. He smiles. Smile back! Smile back!
Remember to breathe.
Smile.
Watching him walk away.
Prepare to start all over again tomorrow.


The author's comments:
I just thought this would be cool :)

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on Sep. 21 2010 at 3:57 pm
Stormythrone BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing is good or bad. Its thinking that makes it so. -Benjamin Franklin

Good job :) Very very accurate.

on Sep. 20 2010 at 7:09 pm
Silence-Is-My-Virtue GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The sentence below this is false.
The sentence above this is true.
Try to figure that out." -- unknown

thank you very much! i was kind of going for  just that too. i wanted the reader to feel like they were literally inside her head and im glad that it came across the right way! :)

on Sep. 20 2010 at 6:08 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

I really enjoy the formatting. It if as if I was inside her head, listening to her thoughts. I also found the title to be very interesting!




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