Him...

September 24, 2009
By EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."


My heart melts in two when I see him, one half falling head-over-heels for his smile and the other half regretting my love. I am just sooo confused. I know he is a jerk, it's just... Not when I'm around him, he's so sweet around me. I mean, I just can't decide, if I should even try to move on or keep hope. I'm on a road of indecision. A road that is rocky and depressing yet sweet surprises along the way. It's hard, I have tried to stop thinking about him and that doesn't help or WORK. I still think about him everyday, and I always think about when we danced. When we danced, my heart skipped a million beats, my eyelashes fluttered, my hair flew, and we laughed and smiled. It was the best night of my life, except I know he doesn't like me as a girlfriend, but I don't care. I will wait for him. I am listening to this saying, "Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about." So, so far, I have decided that I am still trying to catch his eye. Our friendship was a huge rope. As the years passed by, I knew that our relationship became thinner and thinner. Before I knew what was happening the rope I had always counted on, became a thin yarn. I have tried making this yarn into a rope again, but it never works. I have tried and tried, but he never looks at me the same way anymore. He used to look me in the eyes, and his eyes would linger there. They were glued to me as if I was the only person in the world. Now, he looks for a second and then just smiles. He liked me but now it is too late. HE has moved on, and so should I. I can't. I am stuck in quicksand. He left me by myself. I was standing frozen by his eyes. He smiled, and then walked away. Now, I am sinking slowly in quicksand. He will not pull me out now. He has passed. Now, I will too. Eventually....



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on Apr. 23 2011 at 4:03 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

lol :) 

on Apr. 23 2011 at 4:01 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Haha thanks.. but don't worry, "babble" all you want :) I love hearing what other writers have to say. And I would do whatever you feel is best... not to your mind, but to your heart :) 

on Apr. 23 2011 at 3:58 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you so much! :) 

And, just hang in there! It'll get better. 


on Apr. 23 2011 at 3:56 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Why, thank you! :) 

on Feb. 26 2011 at 9:02 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

I like this alot. I couldn't help but notice a familiar quote. "Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about." I try to live by that as well. This situation is similar to my own, only the guy sees me the way the girl sees him in your story. It's just, he's not the best guy to be around. Anyway, I won't babble. this is very good:D

on Feb. 8 2011 at 11:30 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments
amazing job. similar situation to someone who is very close to me.

on Feb. 8 2011 at 9:08 am
NCab94 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
32 articles 1 photo 9 comments
You are very talented, keep writing. Good Job.

on Jan. 23 2011 at 9:15 am
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you soooo much!!!!! <3 You just made my day. 

on Jan. 17 2011 at 5:33 pm
JustKeepFalling GOLD, Byron, New York
18 articles 4 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe that happy girls are the prettiest girls. I believe that tomorrow is another day and I believe in miracles.”

this is so amazing! i can totally relate lol

on Dec. 20 2010 at 3:34 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Awww... thanks :) 

on Dec. 20 2010 at 3:33 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

sorry guys... my sister was on mine again haha :) 

on Dec. 4 2010 at 10:25 pm
BeautyandBeast BRONZE, St.Peters, Missouri
4 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Mom: I learned my lesson, I had three of you!
Daughter: You didn't learn your lesson, you had three of us!!! lol :D

i can so relate to this, great job!!! keep going

on Nov. 20 2010 at 6:25 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Haha. 

on Oct. 25 2010 at 6:57 pm
its so true. and sad. dumb guys lol

on Oct. 25 2010 at 6:55 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you sooo much!!!!! <3 Thank you for reading a bunch of my stories and giving me feedback. Really, you have no idea how much this means to me. Thank you!!!!! :)

on Oct. 25 2010 at 6:54 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

I know right???? 

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on Oct. 21 2010 at 5:25 pm
PippinP GOLD, Bolingbrook, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Faith is like learning to walk; you have to fall at first, but don't stay down. When in doubt, don't stop believing.

So sad! I can connect with it unfortunately and I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing!

on Oct. 21 2010 at 4:50 pm
this is what seems to happen to almost every teenager in this world. its so hard to move on when you've had your hopes on that one thing (especially guys) and then they just disssapoint you.

on Sep. 8 2010 at 5:36 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

why, thank you!!!! i really appreciate your comment!

on Sep. 8 2010 at 5:35 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Lol, i will deff. look at your work!!!! <3 can't wait to read it!


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