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Him...

September 24, 2009
By EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."


My heart melts in two when I see him, one half falling head-over-heels for his smile and the other half regretting my love. I am just sooo confused. I know he is a jerk, it's just... Not when I'm around him, he's so sweet around me. I mean, I just can't decide, if I should even try to move on or keep hope. I'm on a road of indecision. A road that is rocky and depressing yet sweet surprises along the way. It's hard, I have tried to stop thinking about him and that doesn't help or WORK. I still think about him everyday, and I always think about when we danced. When we danced, my heart skipped a million beats, my eyelashes fluttered, my hair flew, and we laughed and smiled. It was the best night of my life, except I know he doesn't like me as a girlfriend, but I don't care. I will wait for him. I am listening to this saying, "Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about." So, so far, I have decided that I am still trying to catch his eye. Our friendship was a huge rope. As the years passed by, I knew that our relationship became thinner and thinner. Before I knew what was happening the rope I had always counted on, became a thin yarn. I have tried making this yarn into a rope again, but it never works. I have tried and tried, but he never looks at me the same way anymore. He used to look me in the eyes, and his eyes would linger there. They were glued to me as if I was the only person in the world. Now, he looks for a second and then just smiles. He liked me but now it is too late. HE has moved on, and so should I. I can't. I am stuck in quicksand. He left me by myself. I was standing frozen by his eyes. He smiled, and then walked away. Now, I am sinking slowly in quicksand. He will not pull me out now. He has passed. Now, I will too. Eventually....



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on Sep. 7 2010 at 10:31 pm
paninilene DIAMOND, Long Beach, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Done & Over"

"Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength."

"People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth."

ooh, i love this. amazingly realistic and completely relate able:)

on Sep. 4 2010 at 9:37 pm
Basketball4everr GOLD, Smithtown, New York
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No problEM cHECK OUT SOME OF MY WORK! THANKSS SRY 4 ALL CAPS I CANTCAN'T GET IT OFF LOL

on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:15 am
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thanks so much for the comment!!!!!! ;) It means a lot.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:15 am
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

on Jul. 25 2010 at 7:07 pm
Basketball4everr GOLD, Smithtown, New York
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omg i love this and ive been in simalar situations- they r tough and things like this take time to get over but ull do it! good writing

on Jul. 25 2010 at 5:00 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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I use that saying too! Great piece, amazing word choice and veeerrry relatable. 

on Jul. 9 2010 at 6:49 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Haha it's no problem, and thanks:)

on Jul. 9 2010 at 5:59 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

 

Thank you a ton. You make me smile, and that is great that you are waiting for the perfect guy. Believe me when I say, waiting is sooooooo worth it.


on Jul. 9 2010 at 5:57 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Why thank ya so extremely much :)

on Jul. 9 2010 at 5:57 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you soooooooo much. ;) Don't worry you are now on my list of people's work to read. :)

on Jul. 9 2010 at 5:56 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you very much. Yes, I will deff. check out some of your work. :)

on Jun. 11 2010 at 7:06 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

This is GREAT!  I love it!  Great feeling, very well expressed.  You've got talent!  Keep writing!  Btw, could anyone check out some of my work?

on Jun. 11 2010 at 11:53 am
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
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I love this! I could really relate to the charcter, and feel her pain.

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on Jun. 11 2010 at 8:16 am
this is an amazing story i havent dated or had my first kiss or anything like that (i still hope 2 find the perfect guy) but i can see how you feel :P

on Jun. 11 2010 at 12:34 am
sloane11 BRONZE, Rock HIll, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Some people walk in the rain, ther's just get wet" - unknown

The same applies for me, you are a great writer!! You should read my work

on Jun. 2 2010 at 10:35 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

ur welcomezzzzzzzzzz

on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:59 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

hahahahahhha thanks a bunch!!!!!!! ;)

on Jun. 1 2010 at 10:36 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

honey, if u wasnt good,then i wouldn't comment at all... but i comment to almost everybody..lol.. again... GrEaT jOb!!!

on May. 31 2010 at 4:04 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you sooo much. ;)

on May. 31 2010 at 3:42 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you so, sooooo much! ;) It's comments like yours that really light up my day so thanks again. 


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