A Teenage Love Story 2

September 29, 2009
By JustMe212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
JustMe212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want to look young and Beautiful, stand next to ugly old people.
(love this, hilarious :)


It was a warm June night, the sun just a glimpse above the horizon, with a slight breeze, brushing lightly against my skin. I could feel my dark brown hair flowing with the direction of the wind as i went round and round on the carousel. I closed my eyes and listened to the soft carnival music in the background of people talking and laughing. Even with my eyes closed, I could still see the joyful faces of children, their eyes wide with excitement, their parents watching them carefully and happily. I smiled, capturing the moment. I made sure to mentally write down all the details in my head, so I could retell it exactly to my parents. It’s been nearly a week since I last seen them and would be another month or two until I would see them again, although before leaving they made me promise to call them whenever I wanted but at least, once a week. Their 20th anniversary was last week, so as my gift, I decided to go stay with my aunt in California for the summer. As my mind drifted to my home back in New Jersey, I felt the carousel slowly come to a stop. I gently opened my eyes and let out a happy sigh. I laughed as I struggled to get off my carousel horse. Feeling dizzy, I went to find a place to sit. As I sat down on a nearby bench, my eyes swept the carnival for a corndog stand. Aha. Spotting one, I started walking towards it. Halfway there, knowing I was supposed to call my aunt at 9:30, I decided to see what time it was. I looked down in my bag and began searching for my phone. Suddenly, I ran into someone. “Sorr-“, I looked up unexpectedly into the striking blue eyes of a drop dead gorgeous stranger. He looked about my age, if not a year older and was an inch taller than me. No words could even begin to describe him.
My heart pounding, I tried to catch my breath. Just when I thought he couldn’t get any hotter, Gorgeous Stranger smiled, making his eyes twinkle and my conclusion rip into shreds. Finally catching my breath again, I tried to speak again. “Sorry, I wasn’t watching where I was going, I….My…..Sorry” I stuttered. He laughed, and then smiled again. “Don’t be”, he said. Even the sound of his voice made my heart explode. He held out his hand. “I’m Jonah, by the way “I held out my hand, meeting his. My hand tingled. “Skyler’ I said back, matching his smile. “Do you live around here? I don’t think I’ve seen you around town before.” Deep breathes, deep breathes, I thought to myself. “N-No, I’m just visiting my Aunt for the summer. I live in New Jersey. What about you??” I asked. “I moved here about five years ago from Portland Oregon, so I’ve lived here for some time. How long are you staying with your aunt?” His eyes seemed to sink into mine; making it seem as though each thing I said really mattered. As if I really mattered. My heart fluttered as though it were a butterfly trying to escape. The odd, yet amazing thing was, that, even though it was breathe taking, I loved the feeling of excitement. I wanted to jump up and scream, as though a bubbly volcano had erupted. I could feel it building inside me, as his eyes continued to stare into mine. I loved the way he_oh, wait, he asked me a question. It was hard to concentrate on anything when I was staring at him. He was so beautiful, with th-C***, I was doing it again. Okay, Okay, answer the question, Skyler. “F-F-For the summer”, I said. Ahhhh! Why do I keep stuttering? He probably thinks I have a speaking disorder, I thought. He smiled again.” Cool, maybe we can hang out sometime. I could show you around town, if you’d like”, he said. Oh yes, Skyler would like, Skyler would like Very Much…. “Sure, that sounds like fun. When would y-“, I started to ask, but suddenly I was cut off. “Jonah! I’ve been looking all over for you pookie poo! “ I turned to see who rudely interrupted me, and saw a gorgeous blonde walking toward us with two almost as equally gorgeous girls, one taller, the other average height. The one who was taller was also blonde, but the average height one was a brunette. Judging by the way the gorgeous blonde was walking just slightly ahead of them, I could tell she was the leader of their group. And judging by the look she was giving me, I could tell she wasn’t too fond of me. Great, I already have someone who hates my guts. I sighed. Super. They all seemed to walk in unison, and as if they owned the place, like they were better than everyone else. Their eyes weren’t exactly friendly. As they got closer, I could see two guys with them, who seemed to trail the other two like puppies, obviously their boyfriends. I realized in disappointment that the leader didn’t seem to have one, but apparently wanted one, by the seducing look she was giving Jonah. My stomach turned. “Hey Tara. Hey Steph, hey Cammie. What’s up John, Caleb?” Jonah said to them all, giving me an apologetic look. So the leader was Tara, the two behind her were Steph and Cammie, and the guys were John and Caleb,I thought, hoping I could remember which is which. As they reached where we were standing, Tara went and stood by Jonah; very close, I might add, while the others sort of circled around. Tara wrapped her arms around Jonah. “Where have you been, we looked all over for you!” she said. She gave me a dirty look. “Who are you? C***. Someone call B**** 911. I smiled at my little snide comment, and was tempted to laugh when I saw that my little grin seemed to annoy Tara. Jonah, however, seemed to look amused again. With a deep breath, I told myself that I would remain neutral if anything should happen. At least for now, HeHe. “Hi, I’m Skyler. I’m visiting here from New Jersey for the summer.”Nice. I smiled to myself. Lets just hope I could stay calm for the rest of the night.


The author's comments:
This is the first part edited and the second part. There will be more to come :)

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TuffGUrl said...
on Jun. 19 2010 at 9:38 am
what's with all of the capitol letters and astrics after??? I don't get it and i don't think it fits with the story. why are you using the first part and putting it in the second part? I'm really confused and I don't get this.

JustMe said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:55 pm
lol umm....thanks? :) i'm not sure if you liked my story or not, but..ya, i dig :)

JustMe said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:50 pm
Um, im not sure what mediocore means, but theres other stories that go on. This is just one of the parts :) But thanks :)

on Mar. 23 2010 at 4:16 pm
monicalillian SILVER, Holladay, Utah
5 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"forgive your enemies, nothing bugs them more."

oh my i like it, its really good...keep writing

Marloneeeeee said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:40 pm
i like this

on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:36 pm
tyrone i hear dat..!

on Mar. 23 2010 at 10:26 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Um.....I don't get it. The writing is a wee bit mediocre, the story is realistic, I guess, and doesn't really have an end. It starts out really good, building up to something and then.....nothing. Not your best work. But still, there is promise. Keep it up!

JustMe212 GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 8:45 pm
JustMe212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want to look young and Beautiful, stand next to ugly old people.
(love this, hilarious :)

Hey the 'Teenage Love Story 4 is up and running :)

JustMe212 GOLD said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 5:23 pm
JustMe212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want to look young and Beautiful, stand next to ugly old people.
(love this, hilarious :)

Hey :) I've got the fourth part up :) its just got to get put online by the editor people :) which might take a while...lol but its on the way!!!

on Jan. 30 2010 at 4:36 pm
JohnnyDeppLover123 DIAMOND, Holyoke, Massachusetts
54 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be not afraid of greatness: some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them.
William Shakespeare

Wow that story is pretty good...you should write more because I would really like to read more!!! Awesome job!!! : ]

on Jan. 16 2010 at 11:57 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
38 articles 8 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

love it hope you read poetry !! :)

erika4964 said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 6:34 pm
Thank You I can't wait!!!!!

JustMe212 GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 4:47 pm
JustMe212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want to look young and Beautiful, stand next to ugly old people.
(love this, hilarious :)

Hey :) just thought id tell you the 3rd part is up :)

missthang said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 11:00 am
that is a really good story and i like it but it is a little short but it stiil good

erika4964 said...
on Dec. 5 2009 at 1:10 am
Opps I mean : It is now December... Sorry.

erika4964 said...
on Dec. 5 2009 at 1:06 am
I is Now December are you going to wright more or what. Because this is so good I want to read more.

oreally SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2009 at 2:56 pm
oreally SILVER, Point-Clair, Other
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
'No One Can Love You If You Dont Love Your Self '
“Inside the heart of each and every one of us there is a longing to be understood by someone who really cares. When a person is understood, he or she can put up with almost anything in the world.”

I love THis Its Great

AquaMan BRONZE said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:34 pm
AquaMan BRONZE, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
1 article 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can dodge a wrench you can dodge a ball.

This is a good peice of work but it think it needs more action.

Justme said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 4:57 pm
yep. I already posted it, but its takes a while for the website to post it online. Sorry its taking so long :)

biddycakes said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 8:24 pm
biddycakes, Charlotte, North Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 99 comments
is there going to be more?


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