broken hearted, and happy endings

September 20, 2009
By inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
All nature is but art unknown to thee
-alexander pope


As each yellow petal gently pulls off of each daisy, its a field of daisies. tipical story, girl and boy, girl likes boy, boy likes other girl...A girl sits in that same meadow, she grabs each daisy and picks each petal saying " he loves me, he loves me not, he loves me..."all of a sudden he, her crush walks in the meadow... "hey" he says, the girl whispers gently "hey". a tear rolles down her cheeck, he sees the tear "whats wrong?" he asks "nothing" she lies, " well if it makes u feel anybetter, im always here for u as a ... boyfriend..." he says. she asks "what about your girlfriend?" " we broke up" he replies her question, "oh.. oohh..." "so we're gf and bf?" "yes call you tommorow" he replies. "bye" she says. he walks off, turns and blows a kiss, and leaves. "omg! a dream come true!" she thinks and giggles. a happy ending.



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on Jan. 10 2012 at 9:24 am
HarvestMoonFanatic14 BRONZE, Jonesboro, AR 72401, Arkansas
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Crazy, Do you care enough?

on Jan. 10 2012 at 9:22 am
HarvestMoonFanatic14 BRONZE, Jonesboro, AR 72401, Arkansas
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It's too short... and it seems, as Cicichildress said, like he asks to go out with her with out even knowing her.

on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:35 am
Cicichildress GOLD, Bono, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Yesterday is history, Tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift thats why its called the present.

Well it was okay it needs cleaned up a bit and a little longer it seems like they became a couple without knowing each other.....

on Mar. 29 2011 at 6:30 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
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You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

umm okay. i think you have a good like topic for your story but it would be a lot better if you make it longer and make some major corrections. im not hating. a lot of my writings actually start out like this but i go back and make them into the writings they are now. so just take some time to clean it up and you will have a great story on your hands

on Sep. 22 2010 at 4:17 pm
uhhhhhhhhhhh............. srry but that didnt cm very good 2 me.......... it cmd lik at the end u jst got bored and started riting lik u were txting

on Mar. 20 2010 at 4:35 am
musiclover123, ., Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is cruel, you know, that music should be so beautiful. It has the beauty of loneliness of pain: of strength and freedom. The beauty of disappointment and never-satisfied love. The cruel beauty of nature and everlasting beauty of monotony. <3

cute story!happy endings rock =P

emily23 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2010 at 3:42 pm
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Every story has an end, but in life every end is just a new beginning.

yea we broke up

on Jan. 23 2010 at 4:40 pm
inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
All nature is but art unknown to thee
-alexander pope

nice. interestin

on Sep. 30 2009 at 6:29 pm
Yea i like him a lot more than his brother the one I'm dating I mean

on Sep. 30 2009 at 6:18 pm
inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
All nature is but art unknown to thee
-alexander pope

ooooooooh!!! lol

on Sep. 30 2009 at 6:13 pm
Yea well I liked a guy since I was in sixth grade and he was in seventh and now I'm dating his brother!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 4:49 pm
inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
All nature is but art unknown to thee
-alexander pope

yeah but i also liked this guy for 2 years now.

on Sep. 29 2009 at 6:59 am
That happens to me all the time

on Sep. 28 2009 at 6:18 pm
inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
All nature is but art unknown to thee
-alexander pope

yeah it is and this story came from my life cuz i like this guy who likes someone else...: ( so yeah....

on Sep. 28 2009 at 5:00 pm
It was short but sweet I love it!

on Sep. 28 2009 at 4:56 pm
inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
All nature is but art unknown to thee
-alexander pope

it only took me two minutes to think of this but i still like it! thanks!! : )

on Sep. 28 2009 at 4:53 pm
This was such a good story!

on Sep. 28 2009 at 4:41 pm
inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
All nature is but art unknown to thee
-alexander pope

i love happy endings 2! lol

on Sep. 28 2009 at 2:04 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison

ur welcome lol

on Sep. 28 2009 at 10:04 am
Yay I love happy endings!


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