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broken hearted, and happy endings

As each yellow petal gently pulls off of each daisy, its a field of daisies. tipical story, girl and boy, girl likes boy, boy likes other girl...A girl sits in that same meadow, she grabs each daisy and picks each petal saying " he loves me, he loves me not, he loves me..."all of a sudden he, her crush walks in the meadow... "hey" he says, the girl whispers gently "hey". a tear rolles down her cheeck, he sees the tear "whats wrong?" he asks "nothing" she lies, " well if it makes u feel anybetter, im always here for u as a ... boyfriend..." he says. she asks "what about your girlfriend?" " we broke up" he replies her question, "oh.. oohh..." "so we're gf and bf?" "yes call you tommorow" he replies. "bye" she says. he walks off, turns and blows a kiss, and leaves. "omg! a dream come true!" she thinks and giggles. a happy ending.




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Fredwardness said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 9:14 pm:
i think i would like this better if this was longer, and if you actually took the time to spell out words like "you" and omg just sounds kinda flakey no offense =) good job other than that
 
star_561 replied...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 7:59 pm :
thanks for commenting!
 
Fredwardness replied...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 2:04 pm :
ur welcome lol
 
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