Trisha part 2

July 18, 2010
By AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)


Trisha- Part 2: Disasters

“You’ve gotta be kidding me! I don’t know who you are, or what you’re trying to pull, but I am not… nor will I ever be, married!” I shrieked.

“I find your commitment issues surprisingly adorable.” He replied with a perfect smile- too perfect. As though he had bleached his teeth with laundry detergent, or something. He fiddled with his extremely dark brown hair.

“No.” I whispered, I don’t need anyone. My voice sounded weak, feeble- even in my own ears, so I added, “Not anymore.” Regaining my resolve. I was tired of being left on my own, but a stranger could never fill the holes in my heart, no matter who he said he was.

“You spoke your vows- and I don’t care how many times they relocate you, or make you younger, or take away your memories of me. I am yours, and you are mine, Trisha darling.”

“I’d sooner kiss a snake, than you! The venom will hurt much less than what you’ve already done-“I hissed coldly, as I dusted myself off and headed for home. I knew, now who he was.

As I left, he furrowed his eyebrows apologetically, and whispered in my ear, “I never meant to hurt you, Love.”

Just like that, he disappeared, leaving a vibrant long-stemmed rose in his place. I didn’t take it. My instinct told me he’d be back to reclaim what he tried so desperately tried to steal from me so many years ago: my soul.

I remembered none of it- my memory had been entirely erased for my own good. However, late into the night, Ma tells me stories of my former life. Ma is not my actual mother. She is the warden at the institution that I live in as a cover. Even though I am perfectly sane, they were so sure that he would never come back to try and seduce me into giving him my soul, if I stayed there.

There was a time when I was destined to save the world. But that’s all behind me now. I made a mistake in love, and almost paid for it with the security of the entire world. But no one ever told me, that I was married to the Chupacabra Man. He was a soul vampire, I was his victim. One kiss almost killed me. Thanks to him I was useless, my powers had been locked into a part of me so deep, even I couldn’t reach them. My family was in hiding, dispersed around the world. But remorse is not my style. Revenge, on the other hand is.

Stay Tuned for part 3



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on Dec. 10 2010 at 1:50 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Trisha part 3 is now online!

on Dec. 9 2010 at 9:28 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Trisha part 3 is now up, I think it's going to be the final installment, it wraps everything up, and finally explains the rest of it... enjoy!  :)

on Dec. 9 2010 at 9:27 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Thanks! part 3 of Trisha is up now, and so is my new story, The Music! :)

on Oct. 11 2010 at 3:55 pm
Tayrodactyl PLATINUM, Palmyra, Indiana
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you better finnish it lol i really like this, it's officially one of my favorites.

on Sep. 19 2010 at 6:51 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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You know, I had actually decided to discontinue this series, but you've changed my mind!

on Sep. 19 2010 at 6:50 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Mudpuppy's got it down.

on Sep. 7 2010 at 12:33 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

whats a chupacabra? this story is extremely weird, but completely enticing and amazing. 

by the way, i love your endings.


on Sep. 5 2010 at 2:54 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
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Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

Well, to my knowledge they're reptilian-looking creatures that suck the blood of animals, espeically goats. :)

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on Sep. 5 2010 at 2:26 pm
Lorelei SILVER, Newport News, Virginia
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"Nothing is ever easy"- Zeddicus Zul Zorander, copied by Richard Rahl

what exactly are they?

on Jul. 23 2010 at 5:46 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

Chupacabra are my favorite are vampire type creature. :)




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