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[BELLA and EDWARD are onstage. EDWARD is staring over his shoulder like a creeper at BELLA.]



BELLA: Are you a vampire?



EDWARD: No! Yes...



[BELLA whirls around to face EDWARD.]



BELLA: I love you.



EDWARD: I love you too.



[They kiss. JAMES enters and stands menacingly behind BELLA.]



BELLA: Help! I'm in danger!



[EDWARD punches JAMES. JAMES falls and is no longer onstage. The pair kiss again.]



EDWARD: I love you. I don't love you. I have to go now.



BELLA: Aww.



[EDWARD exits. JACOB enters.]



JACOB: I love you too.



BELLA: Yay!



[They embrace. EDWARD rushes back in.]



EDWARD: Hey, get away from my girl!



JACOB: Or what?



[Michael Jackson music plays, preferably 'Thriller.']



EDWARD and JACOB in UNISON: Dance off!



[They dance for a short time before BELLA interjects.]



BELLA: Stop it! Can't you see- my eggo is preggo!



EDWARD: Yay!

JACOB: (with intensity) I am in love your child! [awkward pause] Hey, isn't there something about the Volturi?



EDWARD: Yeah, but that was anti-climactic.



BELLA: Nothing happened. Edward! Please! Kill me so I can live forever!



EDWARD: (looks doubtful) Okay.



[EDWARD pulls out a gun and shoots her. She collapses to the ground; JACOB face-palms.]





JACOB: I think she meant "bite me."



EDWARD: Oh.



[EDWARD bites BELLA.]



BELLA: (rising with arms outstretched) I'm aliiiiiive!



[RENESME, preschool aged, runs out from behind her.]



RENESME: I'm your daughter!



ALL: Yay!



[Cut to scene of the four skipping through a field with "Happy Together" by the Turtles playing. EDWARD, already shiny, takes his shirt off and blinds everyone with his whiteness. Music abruptly cuts off.]



EDWARD: Oops.



End credits.



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Marina_V.S. said...
May 9, 2011 at 6:49 am:
Harsh, but true ;)  this is really creative and funny, good job :)
 
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KCayla said...
May 9, 2011 at 6:12 am:
Nice. That is really funny. I'm a Twilight fan but, I love reading about people making fun of it. Nice job. :)
 
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koda_ki said...
May 8, 2011 at 11:52 pm:
So funny, read it in history when meant to be working cracked up laughing!Good work :D
 
KCayla replied...
May 24, 2011 at 5:57 am :
Wow, that sounds like soemthing I would do. lol XD
 
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Ninja_Writer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2011 at 5:01 pm:
Hahahaha... he pulls out a gun and shoots her-- good job, very funny.
 
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booklover104 said...
May 3, 2011 at 11:55 pm:

hilariously funny, I was doubtul to read it, but it was really funny well, that is pretty much how everyrhing ocurred good job =)

 

 
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BrokenReality said...
May 3, 2011 at 2:10 pm:
the twilight saga sounded even better like this, michael jackson made it 5 times better!!!
 
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love_and_anatomy said...
May 2, 2011 at 11:05 am:
hilaaaaaarious. xD
 
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allegraconbrio said...
Apr. 30, 2011 at 7:59 pm:
That was... hilarious! Fantastically done. ;)
 
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purplelass_3209 said...
Apr. 30, 2011 at 1:57 am:
 It was great and better than twillight
 
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MissTarbet said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 12:56 pm:
I like twilight, but I almost like this better
 
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Sacrifice said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 10:05 pm:
I think some friends and i are going to fiml this and show it at the talent show at school next year. (you'll be credted, of course. :D)
 
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zoid123 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 12:59 pm:
Hahahaha...I love this it's so funny...I love twilight; but this is just great. You did a really good job on this.
 
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porybows This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 1:40 am:
HAHAHAHAHAHA
 
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WritingSpasms said...
Apr. 24, 2011 at 3:01 pm:
 I am dying. xD
 
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Odessa_Sterling00 said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 11:09 pm:

Wow.  Sooo funny.  (Sarcastic if it's hard to tell.)

I don't like twilight so much, but I mean the people who take the time to make fun of it are also the people who read all the book and see all the movies the first week they come out.  

 
Odessa_Sterling00 replied...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 11:10 pm :

PS.

There's a reason this didn't make it into the magazine.

 
Untwilight replied...
Apr. 25, 2011 at 12:20 pm :
Other than the fact that Stephanie Meyer could potentially sue the author and/or TeenInk for copyright infringement?
 
Meko8195 replied...
May 9, 2011 at 10:10 am :
I didnt enjoy the movie...and the books were "okay" .....BUT THIS! this was film worthy. totally awsome and i wouldnt diss on this "too" much. YOU clicked on the link lol.
 
InvisibleNerdGirl replied...
May 9, 2011 at 7:25 pm :

(*same person as Untwilight :P)

I like it, actually! :) I was just pointing out that the main reason that none of the fan fiction gets in the magazine is the copyright issues. I know this because my dad teaches copyright law and it tends to infiltrate your brain under such circumstances. O_O

 
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