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This poem is about taking a step back and realizing the world and all its struggles and imperfections.
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Lizzy17 said...
Dec. 11, 2013 at 12:58 am
Heart-wrenching, truthful, and beautiful. You will go far in life if you keep voicing your feelings; and eventually people will have no choice but to listen.
 
Cypris said...
Oct. 19, 2013 at 11:59 am
We can show love and compassion through Jesus Christ, who cared for us more than Himself! John 3:16 ;)
 
IamMeForever replied...
Jan. 31, 2014 at 3:17 pm
amen! <3
 
Fakesmile said...
Oct. 15, 2013 at 8:54 pm
You are a very beautiful person. Have you heard of Andrea Gibson? (if not, look up madness vase and her name) You remind me a lot of her. You're fluent and you speak with so much emotion. You are my inspiration to be better. Thank you. 
 
Cassie1435 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 17, 2013 at 3:10 pm
OMG I LOVE HER I JUST SAW HER LIVE OMGOMGOMG
 
Fakesmile replied...
Oct. 17, 2013 at 10:56 pm
Then you should know how great you are since her name popped into my head with your poem. Girl, you are amazing. Keep doing what you're doing! :) And I am extremely jealous that you saw her live. Take me with you next time?!!!
 
PyroHearts This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 10, 2013 at 11:21 pm
I love this. You are very talented, and I really respect you. As another person said, slow down a little. But I like how you speed up at times and you're slow other times.

I am touched.
 
PoeticEmcee said...
Sept. 14, 2013 at 1:01 pm
IT TOUCHED MY HEART,#crying
 
tart2245 said...
Aug. 22, 2013 at 2:36 pm
i love it!! i got goose bumps!
 
popberrystyle said...
Aug. 11, 2013 at 3:14 pm
I liked it ,I would just recommend to slow down some..
 
Cassie1435 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 12, 2013 at 11:09 pm
i know :( i try 
 

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