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This is an original poem, read by the poet at the awards ceremony in which it was honored for receiving first place. Enjoy!

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Wildflower30 said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 2:37 am:
What stood out was your confidence and your expression. Of course, "Mulberries" is an attractive title and it was a really nice poem.
 
DeusExMachina replied...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 3:12 pm :
Thank you!
 
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ballinbill said...
Oct. 5, 2011 at 12:22 pm:
that was the best thing ever itt made me cry
 
DeusExMachina replied...
Oct. 5, 2011 at 7:11 pm :
I have a feeling you may be being sarcastic. If not, thanks for the feedback.
 
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Leanne said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 9:38 am:
Very convincing poem, read with confidence and very expressive, the style of your poetry was very different too! well done :')
 
DeusExMachina replied...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 2:26 pm :
Wow! Thank you! :)
 
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consumedbygrace247 said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 10:49 pm:
I really loved it. Your tone of voice made it sound...matter of fact. Yes, you do wish you were a bird. For some reason, I believed it. Wonderfully read and written. :)
 
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ExpRESsY0uRselF said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 7:20 pm:
Nice poem, very nicely read. I like your expression, it worked really well with the tone of the poem. Great job! Btw, if you have time, please check out my poem, The Girl Inside, and all my other poems. Thanks!
 
DeusExMachina replied...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 9:03 pm :

Thanks!

 

 
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LanielooThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 10:07 pm:

I like the poem, but for some reason, I thought of Dr. Seuss... maybe because of the book "And to Think That I Saw it on Mulberry Street"... sorry... random thought.

nice poem

 
DeusExMachina replied...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 10:13 pm :
hmm well no Dr. Seuss was involved... haha Thanks for the comment! (maybe I should've rhymed that...)
 
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Ramsha S. said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 8:12 pm:
 nice poem :)
 
DeusExMachina replied...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 8:26 pm :
Thank you!
 
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DeusExMachina said...
May 16, 2011 at 4:28 pm:

Here's the link to the written version of the poem!

http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/321637/Mulberries/

 
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