The Pain Of Loss

February 5, 2018

Its painful to see your love one,

In a hospital bed.

You feel so hopeless.

Wondering what will happen next.

The inner child that was inside you,

Finally come out and cries.

Your heart is cover from pain,

And your mind is surrounded by sadness .

Wondering what will you do.

Feeling so useless.

That you even can’t help them,

The only thing you can do is wait.

Remembering all those time you were together,

Those enjoyments moments that you had.

Wishing you can travel back in time ,

And spend more time with them.

All those time you got scolded,

To create a better man.
 






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WolfWhisperer0911This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 9:50 pm
@DarkPoet All I can say is relatable to my 12-year-old self who lost his mother without knowing that he won't see her for a long time. Great job!
 
Mag;)This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 8 at 1:46 pm
Wow I am in a the same situation if you look at my poem "reality", you will see how I deal with my losses and its nice to see that there is someone that relates. The Poem is absolutely breathtaking though amazing job!!!
 
DarkPoet replied...
Feb. 8 at 2:18 pm
Thanks a lot im happy someone can relate @Mag;)
 
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