Jar of emotions

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when contol is dire,
peoples emotions expire.
Theres a point in life where you need to take a brand new slate,
between a persons love and a persons desire ,
theres always the heat, and then theres the fire.
Then theres explosions that brings death.
But, that one last breath a person takes is
all it takes to realize that was a mistake.
After devistation theres a brand new lighting,
a lighting on whats wrong and whats right.
If only we were made of glass,
then our relationships would last.
we´d see whats wrong and try to fix it,
and the good of our lives would show within it.
A persons kept promise through lightning and
then thunder will show faith nothing left to ponder.
I don´t know what I am to you or who you are to me,
its a raw relationship, but i´d never say it was pretty.






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Ana143This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 15 at 1:17 pm
I like this very much, amazing!
 
chetodd replied...
May 15 at 1:36 pm
thank you, it just came to me when i was mad.
 
Ana143This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 15 at 9:31 pm
I've done the same thing lol, can't wait to see and read more from you!
 
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