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Beyond the Starlight Sky

October 12, 2009
By M.G. James SILVER, San Diego, California
M.G. James SILVER, San Diego, California
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My Dina you’re wiser than wise
Oh, what your eyes can see!
You’re the only one who understands
My curiosity
So please tell me...
Why does the whispering wind
sound like a lullaby?
Is that the magic music
from beyond
the starlight sky?
Why can’t the swallows remain?
Where is the place they fly?
Why can’t I go along
with them
beyond the starlight sky?
If I climb the highest tree
where oh where would I be?
Would I find a place for me
in the land of grand enchantment?
Where do the clouds disappear
when they go rolling by?
I’m wondering about the world
beyond the starlight sky!


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on Sep. 21 2012 at 8:15 pm
JuliaRuby SILVER, Melbourne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you will land among the stars
By Les Brown

beautiful and enchanting

on Feb. 14 2012 at 9:39 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

i agree with that!! it is good and being grammatically correct it would be starlit not starlight

on Jan. 23 2012 at 9:10 pm
FluteWriter BRONZE, Maryville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Living life is like writing in pen, once you've made a mistake you can't go back and erase it..."
-Me

I dont know if this is from a song, if it is then that plagiarism and could into serioues trouble. Its really good (if its yours) but its not a Sonnet.

on Dec. 16 2011 at 4:57 pm
andreamarie5683 SILVER, Metuchen, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"When someone shows you who they are, believe them" - Maya Angelou

...yeah isn't this "beyond the laughing sky"? the deleted song from alice and wonderland.....?

cloak said...
on May. 1 2011 at 8:59 pm
It's funny how you just took the lirycs from DIsney and changed a word. And people think that it's your original work. Shame on you.

on Feb. 27 2011 at 9:55 am
Allthegoodnamesaretaken BRONZE, OKC, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Through every dark night, there's a bright day after that. -Tupac

It should be starLIT not starlight using correct grammar but other than that, it's really good.

on Oct. 18 2010 at 10:58 am
shreya756 PLATINUM, Gurgaon, Haryana, Other
27 articles 4 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
When it gets dark only then can you see the stars...
If a million people believe in a foolish thing, it is still a foolish thing.

I totally agree with the previous statement. It makes me want to meet the narrator. A magical and enchanting poem.

on Sep. 26 2010 at 12:29 pm
LilMess PLATINUM, Key Colony Beach, Florida
25 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything we do we are bound to repeat. Thus, excellence is not a chance but a habit.

I love the excitment the narrator has! It makes me want to meet her. Beautiful job!

on Jun. 30 2010 at 11:11 am
peacelovepoetry, Florissant, Missouri
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this is such a beautiful poem!!! it's so cute :)

on Jan. 5 2010 at 2:58 pm
life_of_a_leaf PLATINUM, Morris Plains, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We're all just kids who grew up way too fast" - The Cab

i like its liveliness. very cool

on Oct. 23 2009 at 3:02 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

It's vry enchanting...I enjoyed it:) You should check out some of my poems;)

on Oct. 18 2009 at 1:30 am
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If you have them, flaunt them" -Circle of Friends

"may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past" -irish blessing

If male homosexuals are called "gay," then female homosexuals should be called "ecstatic."

i love this one, it asks the questions all our hearts ask about nature but we never really look for the answers

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on Oct. 17 2009 at 4:50 am
Ruthey GOLD, West Midlands, Other
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I really like this poem; it's conversational, it draws the reader in, and it's funny and joyful. it could have ended up being a total cliche but actually you've handled it really well while still making it accessible to the reader. well done! id really appreciate if you could have a look at my poetry too. thanks!

Lisha BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 2:02 am
Lisha BRONZE, Karachi, Other
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Beautiful :)


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