Hell's Angel

March 17, 2016
By EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
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With dark eyes that glistened like amber rain,
And a sweet smile as a clever mask,
He captivated me, but all in vain.
He seemed so perfect; why did I not ask?
I should have known he was hiding something;
Even the devil was once an angel.
For anyone with a pair of white wings
Can descend from Heaven and into hell.
He was an actor on his own stage,
Taking the role of being ‘mine’ awhile.
I wish that I had never turned the page,
And that I ignored his fake smile.
But I will get revenge and make him see
Without him, I’m as happy as can be.



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on Apr. 11 2016 at 6:13 pm
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
16 articles 4 photos 64 comments
I actually followed a template my english teacher gave me, because this was for a school assignment. It's a certain type of sonnet

on Mar. 30 2016 at 10:23 pm
ambivalent GOLD, West Bend, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

Just out of curiosity, do the lines that do not have 10 syllables hold any more significance in comparison to the lines with 10?




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