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Sun And Moon

March 3, 2015
By BreezyMonk GOLD, Uniontown, Ohio
BreezyMonk GOLD, Uniontown, Ohio
18 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
The road to you is hard, bumpy, and full of holes but its worth getting to know the real you.


Oh how you guide my way, my life like wisps

Banishing shadows away from my sight

Surrounded by sparkling eyes of the myths

Forever backed by the inviting night

 

And you dancing around your brighten world

Watching us with haloed smile aglow

With your garden tailed fire all groomed and curled

Sitting and waiting to be praised below

 

Sadden, the people, to watch your setting

But your rising upon to light the dark

And the glory you both seek you'll be getting

For with you life ist worth the embark

 

Both are needed to guide our colored path

And to fight our demons made by our wrath


The author's comments:

I know this is not the best but this is my first sonnet I wrote. Also every spelling mistake is on purpose so don't think I am stupid because it is supposed to be like it.


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on Mar. 5 2015 at 3:07 pm
BreezyMonk GOLD, Uniontown, Ohio
18 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
The road to you is hard, bumpy, and full of holes but its worth getting to know the real you.

Thanks and I will

on Mar. 4 2015 at 1:13 pm
Leajade9 SILVER, Kannapolis, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Trust your heart if the seas catch fire, live by love though the stars walk backwards"

To be your first sonnet this is amazing. Great technique here. I give it a thumbs up. Check some of my work out why don't ya. Tell me what you think? (-;