A Faithful Friend

September 23, 2013
Hannah? A faithful friend’s worth more than gold!

Despite what the economists would say.

Your beauty is a pleasure to behold;

I pray that as a friend to me, you’ll stay.

Oh Hannah, you were first to talk with me,

When I was new and had no one for aid;

I will make up to you somehow, you’ll see!

I’ve made mistakes, just like all humans made.

But Hannah, my sweet friend, that’s no excuse;

I must learn to control myself, no doubt!

My words were childish, hateful, and obtuse;

It is not right to curse, and hate, and shout.

And yet, I did all this to you, my friend;

Forgive me, oh sweet Hannah, I have sinned!

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Itsme24 said...
Jun. 13, 2014 at 12:20 pm
Its really wonderful :)
The-Noir-Poet said...
Sept. 26, 2013 at 1:13 pm
If you are on the wrong road, turn back. "Kinky Boots, The Musical"
Hanban12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 25, 2013 at 6:22 pm
This is absolutely amazing in every way and without a doubt made my day! (hey, a rhyme!) And I just wanted to say thank YOU for being a wonderful friend as well :P AND thank you for writing this poem in which I am eternally grateful for :3 It means sooo much! :D :D And, the last part, theres nothing to forgive :)
Hanban12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 25, 2013 at 6:48 pm
And dont change who you are no matter what :)
LitttleMissSunshine replied...
Sept. 25, 2013 at 7:53 pm
this is amazing
The-Noir-Poet replied...
Sept. 26, 2013 at 9:22 pm
its really cute in an epic dragon fight way
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