A Faithful Friend

September 23, 2013
By rokkotothezee GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
rokkotothezee GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I never sleep, 'cause sleep is the cousin of death


Hannah? A faithful friend’s worth more than gold!

Despite what the economists would say.

Your beauty is a pleasure to behold;

I pray that as a friend to me, you’ll stay.

Oh Hannah, you were first to talk with me,

When I was new and had no one for aid;

I will make up to you somehow, you’ll see!

I’ve made mistakes, just like all humans made.

But Hannah, my sweet friend, that’s no excuse;

I must learn to control myself, no doubt!

My words were childish, hateful, and obtuse;

It is not right to curse, and hate, and shout.

And yet, I did all this to you, my friend;

Forgive me, oh sweet Hannah, I have sinned!


The author's comments:
I have many good friends here, but this poem is dedicated to Hannah, a wonderful person and the first one to talk to me here :)

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on Jun. 13 2014 at 12:20 pm
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
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A smile hides everything.

Its really wonderful :)

on Sep. 26 2013 at 9:22 pm
The-Noir-Poet GOLD, Sandy, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"It is part of wisdom never to revisit to a wilderness... To return not only spoils a trip, but also tarnishes a memory." Aldo Leopold

its really cute in an epic dragon fight way

on Sep. 26 2013 at 1:13 pm
The-Noir-Poet GOLD, Sandy, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"It is part of wisdom never to revisit to a wilderness... To return not only spoils a trip, but also tarnishes a memory." Aldo Leopold

If you are on the wrong road, turn back. "Kinky Boots, The Musical"

on Sep. 25 2013 at 7:53 pm
LitttleMissSunshine SILVER, Braceville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I hate living but there is so much more I want to do before I die.

this is amazing

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Sep. 25 2013 at 6:48 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

And dont change who you are no matter what :)

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Sep. 25 2013 at 6:22 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

This is absolutely amazing in every way and without a doubt made my day! (hey, a rhyme!) And I just wanted to say thank YOU for being a wonderful friend as well :P AND thank you for writing this poem in which I am eternally grateful for :3 It means sooo much! :D :D And, the last part, theres nothing to forgive :)




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