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Thoughts

June 10, 2013
By Anonymous

They are like monsters taking over me,
Their haunting words that keep me up at night.
Invisible strings are starting to snap.
My passion is snapped like a plane just crashed.

A silent scream that nobody can hear.
Nobody knows what these monsters have caused.
A smile on her face that covers them,
I feel like i’m a bully to myself.

It is almost like they are sinking me,
I am just like a ship slowly sinking.
A once happy girl is now a dead leaf,
Waiting to be blown away by the wind.

What if my thoughts were not being naive,
And maybe it is me, waiting to leave.


The author's comments:
a few songs and a book I read inspired me to write this, and also seeing how many teens are depressed or just want to give.

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on Jun. 28 2013 at 3:10 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i like this a lot! you used such descripive words and they came across so strong so we could imagine everything in our minds (: you connected with the audience so well! 5 stars! (: i loved it! would you mind commenting and checking out  my new piece 'screaming, hitting, moving on' for some feedback? thanks! and again! amazing job (: